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Questionable Answers 11/29/11 . chapter 1
I love it. This is coming from 9 years after you wrote this story, and I'd like to point out that going by the manga, Time does not pass at all, so no one will age. ever.

I like Ran as a school teacher. Its suits her. I hope you don't mind if I borrow that, someday.

In my own writing, I haven't decided if she's a teacher or a doctor.
insanewriter1220 7/25/11 . chapter 1
Great choice of literary words. You should make another chapter. Seriously, I'd never thought that Ran was the teacher. Nice Story! Keep up the good work!
Haruna Pan 5/2/11 . chapter 1
Well, that is if she had taken something related to Apotoxin and if they don't come up with some strange connection between her and Pandora...

Thanks for the story, sayonara!
A Midsummer Night's dream 3/14/11 . chapter 1
...I'd be damn disappointed and depressed if this were to , yes, but I've waited so long and then bam!the ending is just like that?

This one is a memorable fanfiction, despite being a oneshot(or is that part of the reason?), it's most likely the first ever story that told me of one of the many possibilities that might happen in the Detective Conan universe.
hayella 8/1/10 . chapter 1
Nice idea! It's amazing :)
King InuYasha 10/17/09 . chapter 1
It actually doesn't seem to stop the aging process, rather, she continues to take small dosages of it to retain her youthful appearance. Otherwise they would have slightly slower than normal aging. I don't remember where I heard of that though, but I just wanted to state that your one-shot is possible.
xxBakaAkki 2/11/09 . chapter 1
Kya! This was so fluffy! X3 It gave me fangirl syndrome! lol great job on it :3
A Midsummer Night's Dream 6/6/08 . chapter 1
Man...I'll be disappointed too.
RandomPerson 2/11/08 . chapter 1
Yeah, if they ended the series like this it would be awkward AND dissapointing. But, it ain't *too* bad...and the twist of Ran Sensei was ingenious.

Check your punctuation and spelling…I think it was pretty much all right, but if I remember correctly, there were one or two confusing parts.

Keep writing! this was fantastic.
Black-Dax 8/21/07 . chapter 1
very god, inspiring
Shadewolf7 7/15/07 . chapter 1
Um. Well, cute, though not overly optimistic.
Basser 10/30/06 . chapter 1
Aha! Finally someone who concedes that Vineyard is affected by the apotoxin! I never let Conan grow up in my stories for that exact reason, and yet nobody else seems to think about it... Very annoying. Anyway kudos for noticing that, and convincing me that I'm not crazy for following it.

Sweet and cute, obviously. I think it would be a little hard to pretend to sit through an english class with your lover every day and not have -somebody- figure things out eventually. xD Still, though. Adorable what-if. Definite favourite. ;)
Fyliwion 7/17/05 . chapter 1
*giggles* this is VERY sweet... and very different.. Ran as a teacher *g* I can see that.. poor shinchan tho.. I wouldn't talk in class either XD But it is a good ficcy and a very sweet one
Shota Fairy 3/14/05 . chapter 1
baum chika waum-waum! hahahahaah, how hilarious. 14...dating the teacher...haha, even tho he's mentally older, it's still pretty kinky.

only, why would Conan pretend he doesn't know Ran-sensei well? It's not like it's a secret he lives with her. The Detective Kids know. ::shrugs:: And i've seen several stories in which shinichi tells ran or has told ran the Truth, and yet i have NEVER seen anyone touch the issue of what happens to Detective Mouri once Ran knows it's Conan solving the cases. I just don't see 'her father taking credit for shinichi-kun's brilliance' sitting very well with her conscience. and yet, how to tell the old man? maybe you could write a stroy that deals with that? lord knows i couldn't. I'm only good for dirty, sexy Heiji x Shinichi fix. Yep. Well, if you still check reviews on old fics and see this even, i hope you consider the idea.
koolkame 8/26/04 . chapter 1
That's pretty cool. What I love about the series is the premise and its possibilities for the future. It really shows a level of devotion that Ran would be willing to wait so long to be together. Nice work!
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