Whoops! Forgot to review! I like this story so far. I think it has a good plot and storyline. Keep it up! Wait a minute...Ryoko? I thought it was Rouko or...however it's spelt! Bah, I like this...is there anything I am SUPPOSED to say? I like it, I like it, I like it.

did i actually review this story already? kewl ,amazing, i did lol! yes, i ma a tiny bit hyper if u can't tell, and again distracted (the clouds r gone...). Bye again.

-Anna

P.S.- this review agrees w/ my last one _

A very cute story but wouldn't hane been better if it were Hotohori?

Sincerly

Ume Small Lady Michiru

Looks like this is going to be a good story! Looking foward to updates!

wow. thats a pretty nice story. i like the sword fight when he gets stabbed, than he puts the sword to his stomach, ' now whos winning? ' he he, that was cool.

I love this so far. Give us more. Oh and like the rest of the reviews...ROUKO not Ryoko.

Cool. But Ryuuen's brother's name is Rokou, not Ryoko. Anyway, i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Nice! Although I must comment of the speeling of Ryoko! lol. I could imagine the poles and Nuriko's father coming down on him with the sword!

-flames n fire

P.S.- I fyou don't know who this is, you're more idiotic then I thought which, I presumed was vertually impossible!

Well, it sounds very interesting! But, just so you know, it's "Rokou." "Ryoko" is a character from Tenchi who is VERRRRRY different from Rokou. _. But anyway. Do continue. Sounds like an interesting storyline.