Keep writing, looking forward to where the story goes! I would, however, spend some time revising, there are a lot of grammatical and mechanical errors. The best moment - hope it was intentional - is when we assume it's Jordan approaching Angela but it turns out be Tony (nice moment of subverting readers' expectations). Thanks for sharing :)

Your grammar sucks. Get a beta.

OOOHHHH that was BEAUTIFUL

yeah- I am glad you've decided to update this story- I am excited to see how it develops - will the twins be Jordan's -how will he react-

So happy you updated. Good chapter but a little short :) I hope you update again soon would really like some interation between jordan and angela and the kids...

I like this story...I'm glad you decided to continue. Seems like it's just about to get really interesting! :)

OMG i didn't thnk that angela will have mark as her boyfriend that actually took me by surprise

at first when a guy seemed to seeing angela at the bar i thought it was jordan but that he didn't recognise her at first :P

what is jordan going to do is he going to stumble while giving his speech or even worse not want to give it because he is nervous as hell from their first meeting?

pleaaaasssseeee update soon :D

Nice chapter! Can't wait to read more

Well, I'm ready for more!

Interesting story line...can't wait to see where it will go. The up-dates are frequent, so the build up to the Angela/Jordan meeting is good; otherwise I'd say put the chapters together to make them longer & have them meet in the 2nd chapter ('cause you know, all of us reading this want our Angela/Jordan fix & get impatient when we aren't getting it!). Keep up the good work & can't wait to read more!

when is there going to be some Angela/Jorden interaction? i want to know more about Angela's past..your chapters are too short i'm sorry for saying that but it's like when i'm reading whenever it feels like something big is going to happen the chapter just ends

but thanks for writing the story :D