Man, I dont know why I never wrote for this sooner! All I have to say is that it made me love your story even more than I already did. And whats more, I really see chapters 6-8 from bellas pov. her perspective on being seperated while in California would be awesome, as well as her return to Chicago. All in all, I cant wait for your next update to either story!
JMAHWK

I must really love you, cuz I don't do boysecks. Ever. But I'm happy for them. What I'm not happy about is that I've almost read everything in your cave of brilliance. I'm pouting over here, jsyk.

Jasper and Bella at the beginning - now that I've read this pov - was my favorite part. I hope you don't take offense to that. I'm a sap for silly and cute banter/inner banter.

I like BPOV... a lot. You should definitely do chapter 12 in her POV. Pplllleeeaaassseeee? (I see no shame in begging)

Yay! I absolutely adored this outtake - I've been dying for some Ed/Jazz perspective, and you delievered just the right dose.

Oh, AND it was hot? Woo-hoo...gotta love an authoritative Jasper.

I am loving the heck out of this story - it deserves so much more love than it gets.

Noel

this is all fuckhot sexy happytimes and then you bring the tears! *happy sniffle*

What fun to see their relationship more up close than we get to see in RLY- thank you TruceOver for making her do it ; ) I love that Jasper's kinda bossy.

I sort of feel worried for Alice, but I do think Edward should go for it.

U know.. I love ladies. ;-) Sooo.. This chapter was cool but the others was better. For me anyyways.. ;P But it was awesome as always so I wanted to give you my support. :-) I wish it would have been Alice and Bella moving in together.. But I guess it won't take long..?

It was awesome (*lol*) to read the beginning from Bellas point of view! I just remembered how much I LOVE your story.. :D

Loved the outtake! Can't wait to read more! Love this story!

Loved seeing Bella's POV. Can't wait to read more!

love these girls, no matter who's talking ;)

Whew! I didn't think it was possible but it was even HOTTER then 2nd time around! I went back to compare some of the conversation to the first chpt from Alice's POV and you hit it all on the head! Nice job swandive :-) It was fun to read from Bella's pov and get into her head a bit more. Hopefully you can write some more someday!