|Reviews for Heavenly Collision|
| EnDuReNcEbYsIlEnCe 10/14/11 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Loved it.
| hylomorpher 7/18/11 . chapter 1
Interesting poem. I'm a big fan of The Fountain. I was impressed by your ability to write a fairly large number of lines, keeping a consistent rhyme scheme, without having to use really awkward or contrived lines to get the rhyming to work out. (That's something a lot of poets, even good ones, can't seem to do.)
I think the poem did an excellent job of evoking the atmosphere of The Fountain. Its connections with the specific plot and characters (if there were supposed to be any such connections) were less clear to me. All the images were beautiful, but I didn't always get what was going on as I read them. However, if your goal was mainly to combine a number of images and phrases as a tribute to The Fountain, then I suppose this poem does quite well.
| prolixius5 5/2/11 . chapter 1
It's a shame that no one reviewed this. I enjoyed it very much! Thanks for sharing. Looking for more from you. Lyxie.