|Reviews for Wings Of Arcadia|
| David Noklevername 4/19/13 . chapter 1
Most either really LOVE their first chapter, or hate it. Don't worry about it, happens to all authors. :P Usually, I don't have a high esteem for a work before it's published. And, if I do, I immediately find all it's faults. :D
| cheyenne 4/18/13 . chapter 22
By far this is the best chapter. it just gave me chills reading it. Keep it up! and Night of blue shadow is just awesome, cant wait for the next chapter.
| DaniPotterLovesGod 3/28/13 . chapter 23
Ha, I love the nickname for scythey. Dudebro!
Yeah, I have noticed your style has changed a little again. If you get your inspiration to write like that from a book, maybe I need to get this book. You are more descriptive than ever!
I honestly think Dudebro is the Grim Reaper or Death. Or maybe not. Maybe he's part of an organization that are all reapers!
Happy Easter! God bless!
| HawkRider 3/27/13 . chapter 23
Hmm... Definitely Death in some form, maybe an incarnate or embodiment...
Well, this was interesting to read. I wonder just what will happen to Riku though...
Also, I wonder what is happening to the Heartless? Are they evolving? Or are they even Heartless?
As for that quote... I know Uzuki says something similar in WEWY, but otherwise...
| Guest 3/27/13 . chapter 23
That was awesome! You did a great job on this chapter!
| blastburnman 2/13/13 . chapter 21
Just wondering, will Sora and the rest of the crew end up in a place like Epic Mickey because it would be awesome if that happened!
| HawkRider 1/26/13 . chapter 21
That was certainly a long but interesting chapter... I'm really not sure what happened to Riku at the end...
Still, I'm eager to find out what's going to happen to Riku now. And if the others will find him...
Anyway, this was a brilliant chapter. That was an excellent fight scene! As long as it was...
Still, great job! I really can't wait to read the rest of the story!
| DaniPotterLovesGod 1/24/13 . chapter 21
I think you did well with Jadis' lines. I'm not sure if this would help, but try reading The Magician's Nephew. Jadis actually has quite a few lines. What you wrote is what she would say.
You really like Riku whump, don't you? First, he gets a concussion on the RLS Legacy, then angst, and now this! I'm not criticizing you. I love Riku or any character whump. And Ansem coming in at the end? What'll happen next?
| Cheyenne 12/6/12 . chapter 20
I love Skyra in the room when she gave sora a point for landing into riku. That was funny. I can't wait to c the world they go to and I want to see what happens to cloud. I'm scared for him. But I also noticed in the last chapter that Mickey gave sora a collar with a bolt on it. Is that bolt? That's cool if it is.
| Cheyenne 12/6/12 . chapter 19
I love this chapter. By far Alexa this has been my favorite. I love Ardeo, he's just too cute. Keep up the work!
| CrystalRainstorm 10/24/12 . chapter 20
OHMYGOD. NARNIA? REALLY?!
I love you so much!
Okay, so in this short time, I can tell that your writing style has REALLY improved. The fighting scenes are even better than usual, and I loved the dynamic characters of Donald and Goofy that are being revealed here. Hooray for bringing in other Disney movies!
Also, I really like how Skyra is trying to be somewhat nice to Riku, even though she's ridiculously pissed off at him. Is that hinting at something? Or is Riku destined to be the Forever Alone guy? XD
I can NOT believe that Cloud is about to die... And you know what mental image I had while reading that scene? That cliff in Advent Children.
ACK. I shall await the next chapter impatiently!
| HawkRider 10/24/12 . chapter 20
I can tell you right now that the World is based on the Narnia books (please don't ask me to think up a name, all I got was Narnia when I did it...)
Well, this was a very good chapter. I really enjoyed it. And don't worry about that little thing in Chapter 17...
And I agree with you on that last scene. I hope Denzel and Marlene are all right.
| Max The Demon Wolf 9/10/12 . chapter 19
nice story Alexa is me anthony.
| roxas key6 9/2/12 . chapter 19
Yyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyy Hovik back and as deadly as ever and xemnes to hahaha love it!
| Guest 8/29/12 . chapter 19
AAAACK. This was GLORIOUS. It took me a few days to read, since I have little free time, but I loved it!
That Radiant Purge thing... Damn. I would hate to get caught in that.
The battle scenes were written VERY well - I know I couldn't have done that .
I wonder what happened to Skyra... And I also wonder how the hell Riku is gonna get back on her good side now. She needs to control her emotions better. If she did, she could probably kill Havok easily enough.