Well written, I must say. It was almost like reading Brandon Sanderson's work, and certainly just as exciting.

Generally error-free, this was definitely fun to read. I don't think that you wrote any of the canon characters out of character, except for maybe a little on Marsh. But that could be because this was before everything that happened in the trilogy. You have artistic liberty, even if you must follow a slight script already written in the books.

I know that this will be my version of what happened before the Pits of Hathsin, now that I've read this.