It's really good. There were a few times where it seemed like it changed prospective, but I love it!

THE WEDDING! My most fav couple LuchiaxAlph _

Wow, not even Cecille has the power to save Dylan. What will happen to Mavi? Please update soon :3

Yay. Alph and lucia are having a wedding! It's really cute how you portrayed Mavi and Dylan.

I would have preferred more Nikolai/Claire scenes though :D

Yay! I still can figure out how to win this game! Its impossible! Anyway keep up the great work!