That was sweet but please get help with the editing. It would make it much easier to read and fully understand and appreciate your story. And it would make it more enjoyable too.

But it was a nice story and I enjoyed reading it.

Tuppence

That was so sad...I liked it. Keep on writing CB fics, I'd really like to read more of ur stuff.

that was...sad. but i liked it

Aww... That was sweet and sad. You should find someone to help edit your stories though (I'll be glad to help if you want, just send me an e-mail).

By the way, thanks for reviewing my CB fic. Adios!

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