you made me cry at the end (kinda my eye crys by itself sometimes)

This image of Eli crying into Clare's chest was nice. To me, it didn't seem inappropriate (considering she wasn't wearing anything).

This was good! And you also made the pain of a girl losing her virginity very realistic, haha. Great job :)

Awwww

Very sexy I like this one but u must continue or elese no more THE bum it even makes me cry

Rite more

From the bum

i loved your story:)

Oh of course I enjoyed this little fanfiction story of yours. It was amazing. So well written. I loved it very much!

Oh man. I loved the ending!

This story was just so cute.. in a dark way.

It almost brought me to tears, it was so cute!

I adored it!

Continue the story PLEASE!

this is so intense.

gah. poor clare. i dunno. i totally get where she's coming from. it makes me sad but happy.

i have no idea what i'm saying.

oh well.

A story!

Wow, that was dark.

Nice though.

O_O um wow

"Just fucking peachy."

XD hahaha best line

Awwwwww! The blood kinda scares me though. O,...,O

"Just fucking peachy."

For some reason, that line made me giggle - I should start saying that.

I loved this! Clare's confession nearly made me cry. My only criticism is that there could have been a bit more foreplay...

Wow I'm just speechless, I love this story & all of your other stories as well! You should really consider making a fully story out of this :D