that was awesome!

whoa that was hot...had to fan myself in many places

thank you for writing this story it's so awesome

I'm not usually a Chance/Guerrero shipper, but this was fantastic. I really loved it and the relationship between the two. This is absolutely amazing. :D

Whoa! She just made it so easy for him to move on without hurting her. Though she's hurting herself cause she knows somethings not right. Yeah, I recognize something in there.

Great writing.

Thanks,

Mercedes

Don't ask, don't tell! I like that last chapter - there really is no reason for Ilsa to know, after all. I also liked that Winston was the one to pick up on all the little things, rather than Ames. Like Casey from that other show we both like, Winston gets stuck in the van all the time, but he's still a professional and I dare say 'once a cop, always a cop'.

Despite the fact that this particular pairing borders on the bizarre for me (although I've heard of Guerrero/Winston - wtf?) I still really enjoyed this story, and far more than I expected I would. I knew if you were writing it it wouldn't be 'bad' but it takes a really good writer to get me to really enjoy a fic with a pairing I find so unbelievable. (I can and do read unbelievable pairings, but when that happens it's not the same - it's not like an extension of the show. I feel like one (if not both) characters often change so much that it just becomes a story rather than fanfiction. Does that make sense?)

I felt that everyone remained very in-character throughout and none of the chapters felt like fillers - every scene had a purpose of some sort. I think what really allowed me to enjoy this fic though was the believability you gave the guys' backstories to explain that the attraction had always been there and more importantly, why it hadn't been acted on. Also, your slash was hawt ;-)

I'm not sure about 'babe' but at the same time, it was worth it for Guerrero's explanation! Kudos to you for surprising me - I was sure you'd have Guerrero top Chance. And while I'm still not really sold on them as a ship, you did manage to write something pretty damn hot there.

I don't normally review individual chapters but I just wanted to say, I liked your bringing Lady Heather in. I'm not a CSI fan these days, but she had SO much more chemistry with Grisson than Sara ever did. (In fact, that smacked so badly of fanservice it made me ill!)

I also liked the Chance-alike. I do hope you're about to do what I think you're about to do, because it's not like anything very much ever slips by Lady H!

Very funny conclusion to a great story. Poor Winston...

Seriously, this is great! you have all the characters down perfectly. The description of guerrero's jeans and a naked Chance in the fridge were just as hot as a graphic description of sex. Keep going.

This is such a cool wrap up! You give us a glimpse of an established Guerrero/Chance relationship here, oh my - and still not sappy! Love the little details that put Winston on their trail and the ending is just hilarious. I'm not sure about Chance "blushing furiously", but the babe-part, OMG, you had me rolling on the floor! AGAIN!

Sigh...a happy ending. I'm sorry it's over, though.

May I just suggest that you double-check the spelling, though, as I'm pretty sure you meant "curve" not "curse".

:)

I just love it. The dialogue comes off so natural! Great start with Guerrero's remark on the "scenic" route home. The interlude with the dvds was a really good idea. And then Chance's incredulous "NOW you want to talk?" - it had me squealing with delight, so funny. What most touched me, however, was the two lying together, their foreheads against each other, and the following dialogue. To say it's not easy to pull off "deeply touching" in the middle of a pretty detailed love scene would be an understatement - you managed it perfectly! And such a cute ending... You've written a beautiful final chapter for a beautiful fic.

yay! Lots of smut and a happy ending. what more could you ask for. sorry it's over, hope you write more soon,

Enough with the cliff hangers! Please, longer chapters. Love that Chance knew he was there!