Good story

OK this one had me in tears. But I'm still hoping the show gives me a Ben and Lily love story.

Wow that was a really powerful story. Its hard to imagine Lily being suicidal, but she very easily could be with the loss of her fiancée. You did a great job with this one. I enjoyed reading it!

Wow! Another story! And again, I like your writing style.

What I found confusing, though, was Lily and her wish to die, even the wish to commit suicide ... I can't picture her like this, but that's just my opinion.

Nice ending with Ben coming to rescue her ... maybe a little too fast to have them kissing seconds after she wanted to kill herself, but then again - my opinion ... the description of their kissing was wonderful, though.

Again: nice work!

I hope you'll share more stories with us!

Take care,

K.