lots of love, my love, for this chapterr, and it makes me happy that you are beginning to like the pairing :'D makes me proud, it does. i'm still very confused, don't get me wrong, but i think it's coming together at the back of my mind? idk, it might be.
it's very beautiful, love, and i can't wait for the last part! is it going to be shorter?
Reye-chan dA 3/7/11 . chapter 2
Woah, this is crazy xD Can't wait for the last part!
It seems that I have more questions than I started out with.
Please continue.
yuuki 2/20/11 . chapter 2
fffff GOD THIS CHAPTER WAS WORTH THE TIME YOU SPENT ON IT. It still has the simplisity that is part of your writing style and a major part of this story, and the way you tie it together is just perfect and flows beautifully. And all in all, it makes sense, and it makes a link to history, if i am not mistaken. It's very clean cut and well polished, it's like a peice of canvas work or a statue or something like that, and it's not every day am I willing to say that. So, I'm thinking, wtf did you do now, lizzi? Hahaha.
This is absolutely beautiful so far. The descriptions, the imagery, Switzerland, how you describe Austria's amnesia, and yet it flies by so fast it makes my heart skip a beat. I was surprised when I reached the end.
DO YOU KNOW WHAT. SCREW ENGLISH GRAMMAR AND ALL THAT, I LOVE YOU SO THAT JUST MAKES EVERY MISTAKE OKAY. &hearts
I didn't give you the pleasure of a real review, so I'll do this now. You know, this made my heart skip too fast, and gave me that lovely feeling I crave every time (as it is the feeling I want to achieve in my writing) especially with the memory loss and the softness of the peice. It's beautiful, and to me it's like a peice of art, and you know how I am about art, hahahaha.
I am really curious to what is going to happen next. Don't leave me waiting too long, love? &hearts
I also love how you show what the country has went through, or I might be seeing this wrong, idk. I love how Vash is tired, and he openly shows it (well, as openly as he can, really).