Oh my. This is a gem in the Sheelos section.

Beautiful, beautiful writing. I love how you got into Zelos' head. His relationship with Sheena was just perfect, as was every other little nifty detail you packed into this.

Just... wonderful! I sincerely enjoyed reading this!

I can't believe you weren't in my author alerts until now! It's been fixed, so I'll never miss anymore pf your stories!

Um, this was freaking awesome! I love the raw emotion of it. The song really helped to, I really felt the whole thing just tug on my heartstrings. I don't know where you got the idea that this stuff might not be that great, but that thought is a lie. This was amazing! And the end just made me smile! So cute. I adored this. :)

I HAVE NEGLECTED YOU. I'M SORRY.

Anyway, good job! I liked this. :3 It was angsty, yes, but you did a pretty good job with not losing the characters in it. Zelos is still Zelos, and Sheena will forever be Sheena. I wasn't really worried about you messing this up because you're such a phenomenal writer that writing just come naturally to you, even if you're a bit out of your element.

Anyway, thanks for the read! I think that the Sheelos empire is going through another dry spell...

*heart*

Nexus

This piece had a strange feel to it, one that I don't really have a word for. It was well-written, like alwaysl, but something was just...different. Regardless, I loved the last two sections.

Oh, you wrote something! I thought you said you were through! I'd have done a V-Day fic as well(I was goin' to dang it!) but sadly my laptop decided it was going to have its AC cord break and I've been waiting a week and a half to get a new one...

Anyway, stuff aside, let's see. A songfic is surprising to see, let alone a well written one. Most people don't write songfics well at all. Like in most things, you're the exception.

Hey that was pretty good angst, I thought. It wasn't like "zomg my life sucks" angst either, but I think you conveyed Zelos's feelings really well, especially since I think he's a complex character. Even for a Tales character, he's COMPLEX!

Oh, oh, I loved the ending line! Endings are always supposed to leave a powerful final feeling and I really like the way this concludes! In fact this whole story as you can probably figure is awesome. Naturally I have nothing to criticize since, y'know, grammar-wise and stuff you're flawless.

Have a great day, Faux! _