This story was amazing. I really love how it wasn't so direct, that in gently lead us into how they feel. Besides just being overall well-written it was also somewhat poetic which deepened the emotions being portrayed. Everything they did was justified, it all made perfect sense yet left me in a sense of suspence all the way till the end. I was really worried it wasn't going to end well, but it did and it made me happy- though Stan and Cartman seemed to have been totally forgotten in the process, which is okay. This fic had my head spinning with the rollercoaster of a plot and my heart throbbing to the romance, great work!

I just loved this story so much. I really felt like I was right there with Kyle experiencing every turn of emotion. The plot was creative and so well written. Thank you so much for giving it a happy ending. After reading chapter 6 I was screaming at the screen "Kenny don't you dare do that to Kyle!"

That was just so... I can't even find words to describe. I loved it, thoroughly enjoyed reading it, I mean gosh, who wouldn't. So yeah, love3

...wait, it's over? D:

Well, anyway, I absolutely adored this chapter (even if it's the last, because last chapters tend to suck on fics I like). I think you did a really great job on characterizing Kyle and Kenny. It just really seemed like you tried to get into their heads and you did a wonderful job of making them sound completely natural. It really was just a joy in general to read. :) :)

If this is done, I'm definitely going to miss it. It was a very nice premise. I'm always one for getting into Kenny's death and what he thinks about it since they never really go into that on the show (besides the Mysterion saga which I love love loved since Kenny got to say everything he had been thinking about his death; even though Matt and Trey probably didn't mean it to be so deep, I saw it that way). So yeah, I pretty much love this. And you, for your awesome story ideas. :)

Its over. That was... beautiful. Im speechless. Andmy friends are looking at me weird cuz i randomly started crying and saying its over... beautiful story. If you do nothing else, please just continue to bless the world with your writing

aww its over (. good ending though.

*o* It finished! It was so good, thank you so much! I enjoyed every second of this story!

*o* It finished! It was so good, thank you so much! I enjoyed every second of this story!

YEAH! A happy ending! I was so ready for it to not end so joyfully, I'm super happy. Although it is a bit bittersweet...I don't get to look forward to any more of this story now. I really do hope you decide to keep writing, I thoroughly enjoy your work :)

;-; I love this.

/is speechless.

You can't just ask me what will happen in the morning. D: I don't KNOW what will happen in the morning. Only you do, and sometimes not even you. So you're just taunting me by asking me what will happen in the morning. -sob-

Kyle, you don't hide change in your life well. You behave so that everyone knows something happened even though you think you're being subtle as hell. So yeah, everyone knows.

The relationship between these two is so sweet, though. I love the bit where you described how they were instinctively trying to push close to each other. That was so damn touching. :,)

what WILL happen in the morning? i must know!

anywaysies, i love this freaking story! update soon!

I like the atmosphere you've got going of a kind of bending of the fourth wall. Like Kyle is understanding that it's very easy for Kenny to die, much more so than the other characters. It's kind of like he's protecting him from Matt and Trey in a way. xD

One thing I do want to point out is that you're using a lot of advanced vocabulary and it gets a little hard to read and understand. I don't know if you're noticing that. I have the same problem, though, so I know what it's like. xD Just try and make it a little more natural.

You've got me on the edge of my seat wondering what's gonna happen to Kenny. ;)

i love it, especially how realistic it is, love how there aren't any happy endings, yet. Love Kyle especially he's so strong for such a little guy, super super loving helpless Kenny, its great.

sweet chapter