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BelieveInMiracles3099 5/5/12 . chapter 4
I LOVE THIS STORY!
MailxJeevasxFTW 4/24/12 . chapter 4
This is going in my faves!
whitebengal14 2/18/12 . chapter 4
I read her version. :D It was really good. It should be continued
whitebengal14 2/18/12 . chapter 3
So Dick was Nightwing in this extra? That means he was older, right? Probably. Sweet. :D Nightwing is yummy

URGH. You're starting to get me into the idea of liking the Cartoon Network Superboy! I've been adamantly stating that if he wasn't like the 90s Superboy from the comics, then I wouldn't like him, but this fic is making me think otherwise! Dx Which isn't necessarily a bad thing, i guess. :3

I was about to mention how Bats seemed a bit out of character in this but then I remembered that this fic is based off the Young Justice show and not the comic... Brucie acts different in the show. D: Which is kinda nice too... I need to stop comparing the two, methinks.

Did I mention that I really like your writing style? :D Well, I do. It's not overwhelming with details and description but it's still pretty... detailed? I mean, it's like a simple detailed... thing. Haha. My brain fails me. xD Anyway.

I'm going to stop awkwardly rambling and uhh... read the next bit. :D
whitebengal14 2/18/12 . chapter 2
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww You're going to kill me with all this cuteness. This fic is the best. :DDDDD

This is so cute. :D I'm glad everyone is so accepting and and awwww!

I HAVE TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW.
whitebengal14 2/18/12 . chapter 1
Awwwwwww... wow. that was some first chapter. The mechanics and psychology present were really... wow. :D I'm not sure what to say.

I really liked how... real-life this seemed. I mean, how realistic it was. It didn't seem like a fantasy/'this only happens to superhereos' kind of fic but a 'these kinda feelings happens to humans' kind of fic.

Wow. I'm sorry if that seems so muddled. I'm way past overly tired right now. So umm... awkward reviews ftw?

Anyway. Absolutely loved how sweet this chapter was. Extremely happy to know that there's 4-ish more chapters of this to read I hope they're as long as this one 8D

NEXT CHAPTER!
CourageAboveAllElse 11/18/11 . chapter 1
I LOVE the first chapter :) like, LOVE it xD the rest is decent... but the first chapter.. is amazing :)
allan calderini 11/9/11 . chapter 1
love your story especially this chapter Amazing how you write especially this type of possessive situation
KageJutsu 10/1/11 . chapter 2
This was fantastic! Incredibly well written! I normally don't enjoy short reads, preferring more epic novels, but I have been watching Young Justice and I was hoping someone had written for this pairing. And you nailed it! That being said, you absolutely should write a multi-chapter fic of epic proportions for these 2 guys. I guarantee you will have at least one loyal reader. :)
puffin 9/29/11 . chapter 4
This was a great story. I loved it. There were parts I couldn't help but read over again because I was laughing so hard at them. And dang if you didn't nail the charaters right. I could see each and every one of them acting or speaking what you wrote. You did a great job on the charaters. I'm going to go and check out that story that you linked in the last chapter.

puffin
Yamanvie 9/27/11 . chapter 1
Only one of teh best fics EVER! (this from a seasoned yaoi fan)
BAFling 9/24/11 . chapter 1
Ugh! Bloody amazing!Enjoyed every moment.
Kiisa 9/21/11 . chapter 1
Om my god I was like awwww at the end! That was so awesome! Thank you so much for writing it
Poke-the-Jello 9/8/11 . chapter 1
Ha! Whelmed. You won me over with just that, seriously. But I really liked Robin's interactions towards the end. His rebellion and break down and then his sudden vulnerability; it gave a depth to his situation, not just how unusual and embarrassing, but how unfair for a boy his age, the youngest in the YJ, to go through it all. Sorta reminds the audience that these heroes are kids too. Very well written and absolutely canon, even if Kon was more a dundering nimpho than his self throughout this xD
TheWickedWizardOfOz 8/29/11 . chapter 4
Wow This story is totally amazing

Especially with Bruce, you got him perfectly ("Our relationship is practical" "Everything is about practicallity" "Everything is rational" I LOL'ED at those words because its totally a Bruce thing to say)

And Conner's just an adorable puppy that needs a hug AND HE HAS ROBIN TO HUG HIM! . And he brought chocolates, flowers and a comic, I thought that was sooooo sweet, even if it wasn't his idea

And I think you got Robin's playfull personality really well "Oh by the way, just as a conversation starter; Clark, Bruce is in love with you" . totally Robin thing to say

Really great job with this!

-TWWOO
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