Loved this hot one shot x

So very sad that this is a one-shot. A backstory and future to this would be phenomenal - how they came to be and what they would face going forward. Thank you for the quick but enjoyable read!

Sure felt incredible to be under both boys like that. What...you mean this wasn't all about me?

Although this is perfect like it is, more would be even better. Are you planning on expanding this?

Wow. Intense and hot and just wow.

Saw it rec'd on The Fictionators and felt compelled to come discover it myself. Terrific work - evocative.

I would like to hereby propose that SweetD's birthday comes far more than once a year. FAR MORE.

Sweet baby jesus, this was such an epic read. It's short, but as the saying goes, it's not the size that matters.

You conveyed so much depth and beauty here - not just the characters, but their connections and the intensity between them.

I loved that there was a sense of time given, too, and that it wasn't just a boring 'we'd been together for over x years' line, but instead woven into the story of Maria sending contingencies after them.

Love this so much. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us.

I do not know if it is complete or not. but so far this was a beautiful piece of writing.

omg

amazing

love it

This was hot and rather sweet too. :-)

Oh hell! I love a good PBJ! we all need to bow at SweetDulci's feet for them.

I do like the fact that JPB and not entirely free, there are still forces at work against them but love that they have each other. That they continue to love and protect the other.

Bella is quite the lucky girl having the Whitlock boys.

loveit

oxxooxoxoxxo

:P

How very, very lovely! You paint a beautiful scene of vampire life and love. I love the paragraph describing the shimmering scene :) Erotic, sweet, believable. Great job! What a lucky birthday girl! 3

You are the most amazing person I know. Administrath00r, super mom, and crafter of gorgeous smutz. And you have amazing hair. Guh.

This was absolute perfect. Everything I love about PBJ and so much more. The emotional connection, the reverence, the deep, passionate love. Yes. Give me nao.

I can't even think straight because you're just so amazyballs. I loved seeing it through Bella's eyes, her love and need for both of them combined with the playful affection. Just so lovely. The most delightful gift ever. Second only to my mini singing me happy birthday in a bathroom. LOL.

*1 million and 5 kisses*

PBJ! I miss these three, so very much. Seperately, together and on top!

"and their nature to protect, me and each other, meant that every stray touch or errant look resulted in this. Combustion." - This is good. And exciting. yay!

.Lord UNF.. describing their touches?

I loved your description of the meadow. Gorgeous.

Jasper, Peter, shirtless, wrestling. UNF. Yes and Please.

Holy shit, I think you're trying to kill me! Jasper's rock hard thighs wrapped around Peter? AHHHHH!

Ha. Yes. I love that Bella can block Jasper's gift, and down to fuck with Jasper and protect Peter. LOL

I'd be on my knees too, if I were Bella.

Sweet Jesus, YES!

THESE THREE BELONG TOGETHER! AH! LOVE IT!

Gah! That was amazing, you did a brilliant job with this. Seriously. Ah!

xoxo

Jess

And what lovely dirty sexing it is! I dearly love these three together, by far my favorite poly. Thanks for the new story, I love it.

you are too cute. As I was reading there'd be a tinge of T's PBJ and definitely J's. Love it.