You do know that poem is from T.A. Baron's Wings of Merlin, right? Fan fiction, so I doubt anyone's going to smack you for it but you probably might want to include that in the disclaimer, just in case. Anyways, cool story so far.

This is 50 ossum does it become a KURTTY story?

That's it! Well written! I loved it...i wanted to cry...why did everyone have to die! no! anywas God bles u!

Me: ::glares and taps foot:: Ok, that's it! I've been silent for long enough, kusoe!
Kevin: No Japanese, please.
Me: ::glares at Kevin who whimpers nervously and runs away; takes a deep breath:: WHAT THE HELL DO I HAVE TO DO TO GET YOU TO UPDATE YOUR X-MEN:EVOLUTION STORIES? You are HORRIBLE! You give us this great beginning of a story that promises to turn into this great epic story, and then YOU STOP! JUST LIKE THAT! First it was "Why Can't We", then 'The Concert', followed by 'Frigid', 'Home for the Holidays', 'Choices', 'Christmas Miracle', 'My Valentine', 'Broken Hearts Can Mend', 'A New Persepctive', 'Unlocked Hearts', and now this! And don't let me get started on your other fandoms obsessions! Do you enjoy starving us like this? These are too good for you to just STOP! Keep working on these awessom beginnings you have! I mean, didn't we have this talk before with the 'not enough Rovans, especially as good as yours' thing last year? ADD MORE! ::face slowly returns to normal color and Jademagic puts on puppy-dog pout:: Pretty please with Rovan and Kurty on top?

Please! Please write more!

Iloved it, please keep writing, i can't wait to read the rest! :)

plz continue this is a very good story

Ahhh! You have to write more. I wanna, no, i NEED to know what happens to Maddie! I will definatly look out for more chapters.

Okay, I'm like, crying my eyes out here. Chapter 1 - excellent!

::bursts into tears:: This has to be one of the bests stories I've read so far! I mean *sniffle*, all the little X-Children running around. Damn, Evan and Rogue had some cute little kids, with their little Milato selves, and Ororo and Logan ::sigh::. And the pain Kurt feels after losing his family and Kitty being there to comfort him was just beautifully written. I love it. Keep up the good work.

Ugh. It was good. But I can't control the sappy sadness. It's like everyone that people cares about is dying right and left. Gore. If a Chapter two is made I'd honestly be scared to read it!

Pretty good! I like it! But that's so sad when his wife, Amanda, died! I almost cried! Oh and speaking of X-Men are you gonna update that Crossover with Digimon called 'Lone Wolf' anytime soon? I know I should e-mail you but I think I did but you never replied and I wanted to say it now before I forgot. I'm a very forgetful person. Anyhoo, continue with both stories please!

Awwww... so sad :(

It's going to get better, yes?

...please?