Well done.

This was really great! I read it a while ago...over 2 years, actually, and didn't comment, but I was going through my Notebook O' Fics, and reread it for the 100th time, and decided to comment. It was really good, and I look forward to reading the rest fo your fics! :)

Jesse

Woah. I never knew what a vid fic is, but I like them now. Thank you for that literary experience.