I think it was really good and I liked reading it from Lucas's POV. It annoys me but I was always annoyed at his refusal to change for her. You're a good writer and pretty good with your grammar as well. I would love to read more from you on his POV!

I want to cry all over again! I feel so bad for Lucas!

This was really good! This moment was SOO sad. Keep writing!

this is exactly how i imagained he would be feeling and thinking when i read the book. you did a grea job and i really enjoyed reading it and seeing that someone else thought the same thing i did about what his point of view would be like.

Snowy

Why must you re-Write the most sadest thing ever

i cry to much srry

this almost made me cry, really good! I'd love to read more. (:

OHMIGOSH! I'm crying literally crying that was so sad! I loved it though and yes continue in Lucas's point of view!

OHMIGOSH! I'm crying literally crying that was so sad! I loved it though and yes continue in Lucas's point of view!

Aww, that was sweet :)

MOAR :D

I love Evernight. I was practically crying a river when I finishing Hourglass and this is a very good POV of writing is very good :)

i love it. and i love evernight. i would have liked to of head of wat happened after that but it was till really good

Heyy, Omg, I just finished Hourglass, and cried my eyes out for like an hour no joke! And i read this and i cry my eyes out again! You are a really good writer, and god im such a puff to be crying! But who wouldnt cry at the ending? haha, I really think you should carry on writing, as its really good! Honestly, I'd like to know what he thinks! :)

That's awesome! Update please!

That was amazing- apart from the fact that it just broke my heart You're a really good writter and I really like your writing style :) And also I absoluetly love this story a lot :) Good work :)