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  Humphrey 2 8/11/12 . chapter 9 I hope their parents come soon. Props for the humor! Its cool that there is another fanfic author with the same name as yours, his name is Kswolf, but unfortunately he doesn't write Alpha and Omega stories. Keep it up! I love how the story is written! I'm starting to worry that this is the last chapter:(I sure hope it tisnot:) |
| Humphrey 2 8/4/12 . chapter 8 I hope the lightfang guy doesn't make a problem for them when they return! I hope the 9 gth chapter is not the last! |
| Crash bandicoot 8/3/12 . chapter 7 I didn't expect them to go withought their parents! I hope their parents catch up! I'm loving the story! Thanks for the long chapters! |
| Humphrey 2 8/3/12 . chapter 6 Im so sorry for Humphrey:( I don't like how Austin and Hailey are behaving! I hope Humphrey and Kate do something about it! |
| Crash bandicoot 8/1/12 . chapter 5 I like the long chapters:) I think there may be a chance that Humphrey and Kate will get more pups! |
| Crash bandicoot 8/1/12 . chapter 5 I hope the pups grow up soon! For the next adventure! |
| Crash bandicoot 7/30/12 . chapter 4 Uh-oh I hope Austin doesn't do anything bad. |
| Humphrey 2 7/30/12 . chapter 3 I wonder what a wolf would act like if it really did drink three bottles of that stuff. |
| Humphrey 2 7/30/12 . chapter 2 Dominic is like I was when I was a child I hated rules that ruined my fun. Your long chapters give me an idea how to review, Because I like to make one long review, and then there is no ideas or news for the next review. I like how's the story is going! I hope Dominic gets real feelings for a girl. |
| Humphrey 2 7/29/12 . chapter 1 I've always wanted a wolf like Humphrey but with alpha abilities. I can't wait to catch up to where your writing. |
| Guest 7/6/12 . chapter 9 Can't wait for next chapter. |
 The Pack 3/30/12 . chapter 9Dude I love this story. I know this is my first review, but when there's a story I like I don't want to stop reading until there is nothing left to read. This is an amazing story, but from the last time you updated it I'm guessing you are no longer working on it or you just aren't finished with the new one for some reason. Well if you are still working on it I hope it gets done soon because you are truely and amazing writer and I cant wait for it. |
| Corey1011 3/26/12 . chapter 7 Awesome! |
| Kswolf Productions 8/21/11 . chapter 1 sam1: I said she clung to him LIKE aluminum powder on a finger. |
| STORYmaker2 8/19/11 . chapter 9 so they are in another nice home will Dominic and Humphey ever get along and will that girl he keeps striking out with play a role? |
