I really love this story. The way you kept the feeling of the original game but at the same time made it your own is really impressive. There aren't many authors that can pull it off. Your OC's are great. They establish themselves as part of the story without overshadowing its premise. Lanette and Lucas's relationship is really interesting to follow. Are their relationship going to develop into love or a strong friendship? Either way, I hope they find what they are looking for. And the plot is good so far too. It's easy to follow and it kept pretty fresh. I'm afraid to say that I am extremely invested in it.

The only thing that worries me is the update times. I will not lie, a story like this deserves to be done slowly and with as much care as humanly possible. That being said, I don't want to see this story fall though the cracks either. I would really like to see this story followed though all the way to its end. I will keep following until either that day arrives or I am physically unable to. But at least let us know on your profile how far along you are. Your blog also needs a little bit of love, too.

I digress. Long story short: Love the story, love to see more, take as much time as you need, but don't leave us hanging. Until your next update.

Scorpion

Wow, that battle was pretty intense. I can't say I'm happy with Lucas injured, but at least it seems like Steven will change his mind about Lucas -which may as well bring more problems :S . Now to read more :D

It's cool how the Resistance and the Government are two opposing forces, yet, they claim that they're both doing the right thing for the world.

I think i'm starting to get what's going on- it's AFTER Lucas pulled the Needle, so it's not a complete AU for him, but it's years and years after Ness.

in fact, the Old Man was Ness, wasn't it/ And the old lady was Paula. If anything, this makes me wonder what happened to everyone else we knew...

I think the most emotional part though, wasn't Paula's breakdown or anything, but how Lucas acted after he beat that psibernatic. The whole "his brother's eyes" line was really good... no wonder he hated the idea of joing the war so much, reminds him too much of what happened.

And plus, it reminds me of L'il ms. Marshmallow for some reason.

Keep up the good work, i'm really enjoying this story!

*claps* An awesome end to an epic beginning of what I hope to be one of the best Mother/Earthbound stories ever. I may be a newcomer to the fandom (Winter 2011/12), but it just feels like it shouldn't end...

This is ACTUALLY the best Mother 3 fic I've ever read. I'm serious. Please update it soon! I wonder if you'll make it so Lucas discovers Claus is one of those PSIbers! And I love Lanette. She's so awesome. Fuck off, Neo Government and Resistance bitches!

So that's what happened...

The war is finally beginning...

-Emi

*Gaaaaaasp!* So...does that mean the Old Man was Ness? And that the old woman from the preschool is Paula? OMG! Please continue this! This story is awesome!

-Emi

Up much sooner that's a darn lie! :)

Well it takes time to make flawless art. Keep up the good work. Also what about your other story Doomsday! Are you discontinueing that? I hope you don't... but if you are that's too bad.

:(

Well can't wait for the next chapter!

...Claus...?

As usual very good. The battles are as always top notch. Lucas sure is protrayed differently in ur story. The reason I say this because in the game I see Lucas as a flawed hero. He's strong and courageous but his flaw being his timid nature often times leading to him losing close ones. However here he seems to overcome this flaw and become a true hero which in my opinion is the best kind of hero. Anyway great job as usual and I would really love ur opinion on my Earthbound stories as well.

Trivia? I SUCK at trivia xD

Lucas kicks ass ;) hes so awesome in your fic! Amazing work. Update soon?

Yes, pkmn white is fun!

Update!(:

I now like creepy, cruel villains.

AIEEE! More tragedy! I... I really am a sick person to say that. ;_;

I love stories with character death! (wait that makes me sound like a serial killer...meh) Can't wait to read about Lanette's reaction to her parents death. I love this story!

WHOA! i LOVED IT :D

So much..detail! :D

AMAZING JOB! :D

Update soon! Please:)