Really awesome! love how you capture the voices of the characters :D

Wow, really amazing. I just spent the past few days reading this and can not wait for the next chapter. I'm definitely a Garrus/FemShep fanatic and this story is one of the best I have read. Keep up the amazing work.

Update soon! ;3;

I'm loving this. It's a nice perspective on the game, with just enough of a twist to keep me interested. Looking forward to more!

Hell! That's a damn good story you have going on here!
I couldn't stop reading till I reached this chapter and all my thoughts now are about how I need more of it!

You have a great grasp of the characters! Your way of telling the story is just fantastic too!

I hope you can update real soon!

I love Mass Effect. I love Garrus. I also have an intense and undying love for this story.

I've read so many fics on this fandom that were shit; thank you for being an awesome writer!

- The Queen

"At least I'm not a clone. Fucking Cerberus"

This made me laugh a bit considering recent events :P

can't wait to read about Shepard winning this bet.

I can't express how OVERJOYED I was when I saw the update alert for this story in my email. I think I literally squeaked out a sharp "YAY!" then clapped my hands together like a little school girl, lol!

I am constantly impressed by how you create this extra-game scenarios for character growth that fit so perfectly into the main story line. Your characterization is always fantastic-never too cheesy or out of character. The dialouge; again, amazing! I really believe the characters were say these lines and behave in this manner. You've really found away to "get in their heads" and create these completely believable scenarios.

I have to say, I really loved that tense little moment Garrus and Shepard shared there near the end. Phew! Well done. Again, not over the top cheese fest, but humorously flirtatious and yet beautifully sincere. I could feel that lovely combo of "Neither of us know what we're doing with eachother, but I trust you implicitly" thing going on-which really is one of the best aspects of their relationship.

Can't WAIT for the next update! :D

I just love this! I love how you adapt the game to the story! It's all so well done, and it has such a good pace, which is something that is very hard to get. Can't wait for the next one!

The tension and build up is killing me! I cant accurately express the joy I get from reading this.

I'm so glad you updated! I've been waiting forever! Hope to see another chapter up soon :)

PLEASE update soon. This is probably one of the best fics I've read on this site.

You are really good at this! I can hear Garrus and Shepard just as clearly as if I was playing the game. I enjoy the pace of the story and look forward to more!

I wanted to pen a few words to encourage a fellow writer. I enjoy the depth of relationship and background information you are giving us for the femShep/Garrus romance, and I am waiting on baited breath for the net chapter. I look forward to reading it whenever you have it ready.