I liked the fic but wanted to know why he shot her? Very confusing and I couldnt really feel the angst of what jack was going through.

oh, poor poor Jack. i watched that episode not so long ago, and i got depressed too. this is goin on my list of favourites!

Oh wow... this was so sad, and so very well written! Good job. ... SEW

A great read. I really enjoyed it. Nice work. _

Whoa. Deep. And very well written. It sounds very much like what I'd imagine the Colonel to sound like in taht bedside vigil. Thanks.

Maea