This was way dark, and cruelly satisfying. I loved Finn's wanting of Puck to hurt him. And the way you described Puck's feelings of love and hate intermingled, was fantastic! You did a great job at representing these two sex gods in their misery.

The way you wrote it is amazing ! They are made for each other !

so sad TT_TT poor Puck. btw nice fic. and gosh.. i'm so in love with this paring)

Ahh, the ending makes me sad, but I get so happy whenever I see anything Finn/Puck, even if it's a bit disturbing like this.

That was really well written, and it made me sad when I read the little hints that Puck maybe wanted more than what they had. I think you captured them really well, although they were a bit darker than usual, which was most likely for the purposes of the story. Well done!

I know you say this complete and all...but it'd be an awesome story if you wrote more...just saying. Good job anyways.