| Reviews for Defect |
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Mak3sh1ft 4/3/13 . chapter 4This was really great! It's sooo disappointing that every Jyu Oh Sei story I fall in love with is incomplete. What gives?! I know its been two years but you really ought to finish this. You have a very interesting plot. And I love all the new characters you created. |
Guest 7/4/12 . chapter 1 Rai! Brotherly love! |
Sahara1256 5/8/12 . chapter 4Having not seen Jyu-oh-sei in forever, and only recalling the ending that was less than stellar for me, I REALLY ENJOYED THIS its a great continuation of it. I like your characters :) and I like how you played a really modern problem like Eugenics into it. Fits wonderfully. My only complaint is theres a lack of physical description of your characters. I would really love to know what other attriubutes they have. I'm favorite-ing and adding to a watch list :) please update soon! |
PleiadesWolfe 9/4/11 . chapter 4That's messed up about the children. Thor is not going to be happy with Hecate at all. |
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin 8/24/11 . chapter 4Yes! Re-dynamic entry! |
Blighted Angel 5/9/11 . chapter 2Best story in this section :). Well-written, and characterized. Looking forward to more! |
sajala 2/21/11 . chapter 3Good chapter! I'm really curious about those kids but I guess I'll just have to read the rest when it gets updated :) |
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin 2/21/11 . chapter 3Wow. What a plot twist. It feels like a new Jyu-Oh-Sei. |
sajala 2/20/11 . chapter 2I like it very much! Can't wait to see what happens next and how the story unfolds :) Thor Thor Thor... party animal lol XD I updated my story as well just letting you know (Deep in Your Heart). |
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin 2/20/11 . chapter 2Aww! Baby!Rai. I hope he looks just like his father! I wonder what those flashing lights mean. They're probably shiny, too. |