|Reviews for Defect|
| Mak3sh1ft 4/3/13 . chapter 4
This was really great! It's sooo disappointing that every Jyu Oh Sei story I fall in love with is incomplete. What gives?! I know its been two years but you really ought to finish this. You have a very interesting plot. And I love all the new characters you created.
| Guest 7/4/12 . chapter 1
Rai! Brotherly love!
| Sahara1256 5/8/12 . chapter 4
Having not seen Jyu-oh-sei in forever, and only recalling the ending that was less than stellar for me, I REALLY ENJOYED THIS
its a great continuation of it. I like your characters :) and I like how you played a really modern problem like Eugenics into it. Fits wonderfully.
My only complaint is theres a lack of physical description of your characters. I would really love to know what other attriubutes they have.
I'm favorite-ing and adding to a watch list :) please update soon!
| PleiadesWolfe 9/4/11 . chapter 4
That's messed up about the children. Thor is not going to be happy with Hecate at all.
| Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin 8/24/11 . chapter 4
Yes! Re-dynamic entry!
| Blighted Angel 5/9/11 . chapter 2
Best story in this section :). Well-written, and characterized. Looking forward to more!
| sajala 2/21/11 . chapter 3
Good chapter! I'm really curious about those kids but I guess I'll just have to read the rest when it gets updated :)
| Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin 2/21/11 . chapter 3
Wow. What a plot twist. It feels like a new Jyu-Oh-Sei.
| sajala 2/20/11 . chapter 2
I like it very much! Can't wait to see what happens next and how the story unfolds :) Thor Thor Thor... party animal lol XD I updated my story as well just letting you know (Deep in Your Heart).
| Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin 2/20/11 . chapter 2
Aww! Baby!Rai. I hope he looks just like his father!
I wonder what those flashing lights mean. They're probably shiny, too.