"I'm not proper, and the flowers say I'm not pretty," she explains.

"That's not a nice thing for the flowers to say,"

That's quite hilarious.

A lovely story to match a lovely poem.

Aww... this made me want to hug Hamish. I think the only reason he was such a pompous git is because that's what his mother beat into him. Excellent one shot!

chupip

This is so adorable! Makes me like Hamish... but only a bit. ;)

Fell4

Aww. :( I really like it when people show the better side of Hamish. It's completely understandable! His mother forced him to do something her way and we never really got Hamish's view on the declined proposal. So thank you for writing this!

I don't like Hamish but for some reason in this story he seems kinda cute :3

That was so unbelievably cute that I almost feel sorry for him.

Lovely! The poem reminds me so much of the plans I made when I was a little girl. This was very well written, and both characters are absolutely charming.

-3.0

Suberb! Absolutely in character!:))