I kind of like how the chapters are short. It keeps it brief, and I start to lose interest whenever I'm reading long chapters.

update

Please please updateeeeeeeeeeee

Love Liz :)

Ok! Haha, so it was Bex.

Awesome story. Love it! Can you post longer chapters?

my "name" is a spoof on the name of this chapter, in case you didn't get it. i'm trying to say that the person jonas would be talking to would be me, but that wouldn't be a good idea, because i would just laugh at him. :)

anyways, good advice from the z-man. confidence does attract the girls. and i'm gonna guess he's gonna practice on bex. yeeeah. B)

jonas winchester? that's hot. did you come up with that yourself?

ttyl

dude, love this chappie! omg, i love awkward and hilarious convos between guys. i love it. like in avatar: tla, zuko/sokka is da bomb. jussaying.

jonas, with his formal-talk (and being awkward), reminded me of superboy on young justice. dude. forreal. but that is besides the point.

the point is: great chap! you definitely got the story rolling now, with a plot and shtuff. now i get an idea of where you're going with it (i initially thought it was just gonna be bits and pieces of convo b/w l and j, so this is coolios).

anyways, yeah. you get the point. sorry for not signing in, i am too lazy and i already typed this all up. i'll go read the next chap now.

ooooh i wonder who it is...

...isn't he just going to practise on Liz?

Or, another idea, IF you want to involve some ZachxCammie, you can make Jonas ask for a demonstration and Zach can 'act it out' with Cam

BUT THEN AGAIN, the final idea is up to you :D

And here's what up: Jesse. Eisenberg. Okay. So, I thought he was kinda cute in Zombieland, I contemplating watching Adventureland, etc. etc. but holy fuck, what is this fuckery? He's so beautiful and awkward and Jewfro and oh my lord - Andrew Garfield.

You're right, Kaush. He is one sexy human being.

I can't even think right now because alsruwioef and kljWNVKLSDf but oh my god oh my god, Jesse fucking Eisenberg and Andrew fucking Garfield who is apparently British in a non-British way and Mark calls Eduardo Wardo what ah so cute I can't afjlievn.

I'm sorry about that. I'll PM you about it.

"I was your only friend. You had one friend."

I cried, okay.

Fucking cried.

shit, so, i fucking watched the social fucking network.

(oh yeah, i started using the shift key, but right now i'm a but too stunned to function properly)

Hmm…Macey? If not then Bex.

Mmmmmm... Who could that person b?

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I give up :) update soon!

Xoxo

Aly

wayy to short if thats it'll you might as well combine it with another chapter

Now this I wanna see!