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DCWestby
2006-08-14 . chapter 6
now this is original... In a way, this Ranma is training Nabiki with the bed alarms.. I really like this... Hope you continue this story soon.
Ryo-chan wolfgirl
2006-01-09 . chapter 1
Please contiue this story, I love it so much!
internet weaver
2005-08-25 . chapter 6
It's mcgyver, not macguiver.

Aside from that, an excellent story. I espescially like the whole werewolf thing, but I wonder why you haven't written anything about the neko-ken (cat fist) technique.

Also, since they're so accepting, you'd think that Ryoga would just tell them.
internet weaver
2005-08-25 . chapter 4
you seem to be forgetting that Ryoga is very polite and shy around girls.
EternallyLost
2004-10-02 . chapter 6
Hmm... if Ryoga's training was so stupid, I wonder how Ranma learned his fire and water techniques...?

Anyway, good work here.
Chaos Horse
2004-07-26 . chapter 6
God, I love this fic, it is among my favorites, I love the way Ranma and Ryouga fight each other, alsto the booby-trap war of Ranma and Nabiki is funny as hell
I just have one question, seeing that Ryouga's father converted Ryouga in a Werewolf, does that mean that Genma did something equaly stupid and somehow Ranma is some sorth of werebeast? (Weretiger maybe?)
Shark8
2004-05-29 . chapter 6
Good work, I liked the Nabiki/Ranma booby-trap war, it was quite amusing. I also like how you handled Akane and Nabiki in the last scene, a nice use of indirect/subtil humor. All in all, excelent work, and I look forward to the next chapter.
xcom1a
2004-04-25 . chapter 1
good story
Shark8
2004-03-24 . chapter 3
I like you solution to joining the three schools of anything goes. Your rewrite of the begining of the series is quite good, I can tell you've got a good grip on the "What if..." here. Some people tend to go out of character in their writing with no character development to show why, but you've done a great job, the characters still feel "in character" even with the changes in personality. Ranma and Ryoga would be different with their rivalry already determined by their fathers.
Anyway, I think you've got some good character development and a good storyline to boot.
Keep up the good work, `cause I'd like to see another chapter.
nice.
2004-02-19 . chapter 5
nice! the whole "ranma and ryoga both fall into drowned girl spring" rocks!
Dark Master Schmidt
2004-01-20 . chapter 5
LOL, I love this chapter. =D
Nichole Hibiki
2004-01-15 . chapter 5
Sweet this story has been updated, I've waiting for months for this fic, Please continue soon.
Seiat
2004-01-15 . chapter 5
Great story so far, update soon!
Nichole Hibiki
2003-09-10 . chapter 4
Nice Chapter, maybe for Ryoga to get even with Ranma, Ranma should go into Neko-ken and go after Ryoga or something like that.
Dark Master Schmidt
2003-06-30 . chapter 4
This is awesome. I'd love to see more. =)
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