Hi, firstly thank you for update. I'm slightly hooked on this story, largely because I'm hoping it's going to turn into a great story once it's finished. Will it ever get finished? I ask this because to be honest it is starting to read like it's loosing direction. Either that or you seriously enjoy leaving your readers in suspense. This wouldn't be a problem if the updates were frequent. Usually when stories take a long time to be written is because the writer is having writer's block.
Nonetheless, there are also a few things to wonder about this chapter and maybe the last one too. How come all this crap was happening to Tony? Where was Bella? What sort of mother does this make her if she is unaware that her son is somehow being abused/ bullied/ threaten whatever you want to call it.
I really hope you get to finish this story and hopefully soon. And I really really like Tony's perception of the wolves. They really are testosterone filled fools!

all right Edward come get your kid.

he is full of anger on how they have had to survive. This is normal for a boy to defend his mother and be against his father. Reni will want Edward and she will seek him out. She will forgive what she does not understand.

good story.

well here we go.

yikes .. Papa is in the house.

he is dreaming of Victoria?

This confrontation is interesting, esp as it mirrors the scenes you depict in the past. I'm still scared sh*tless for Tony, and I don't like the fact that Bella and Reni are so far away. I'm interested to see how this all plays out.

Hi! Happy to have another chapter from you. :)

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Another strong chapter, can't wait for more.

ok still getting lost in the flashback and present, even with the change in script, and the voices inside his head. i love this fic , it is exciting and creative but I find it hard to follow still. Don't let that discourage you , just trying to help ya out.

thought you should know that I drop everything when I find you've posted a chapter. You are loved. ;)

I agree with Tony after everything that the cullens put her through Bella is just going to forgive them? Can you say needy. Grow some Bella and protect your kids. I enjoy the story except it jumps around alot and sometimes its hard to follow

First thanks for the new update.
According loved his chapter with self defense that Tony is learning to use his powers alone. I wonder, Jasper had been watching the area of Bella's house to wait for Tony, then where is it to help Tony? If Jack knows that Tony is the son of Bella and Charlie's grandson who is a friend of Jack's father will be at least that would be in doubt even the appearance of Tony knock your age? Would send one of them to fetch a Cullen opine about it?
And again you left us hanging at the end hem, making the readers here have already become fans wanting more to know where this is going or stop, if Tony will injure or kill any, some or all of the wolves? yes I'm in favor of Tony and believe in its power of shards, hehe. Please do not take this much time to update because we got mad here to learn more of this fantastic writer lol. XOXO