Please update soon, best veronica mars fanfic in a long time!

Wow! This story was nothing like I expected and I loved that about it! I need to find out what happens next! Can't wait to read more. :)

Wow, that was intense. I really want to like Gory but I'm thinking he was the one who released the video and I can't like someone who keeps someone else so isolated and away from everyone who loves her. I get that Veronica cares about him but will she once she learns the whole truth. Plus, for me, it will always be LoVe. This is so good, I look forward to more.

Damn, I never thought I'd feel sorry for Don Lamb but, damn. That was rough. I started this a while ago and found and read this today, it's fantastic. I say again, damn.

I really want to know how Veronica hooked up with Gory and I look forward to LoVe. If you have me all verklempt over Lamb I can't even imagine how I'll be reading Logan/Veronica. I'm guessing a gooey sobbing mess?

Wow what a chapter! Mercer is a very twisted person I suppose Veronica has killed him and Gorya helps her to hide this fact from the authorities.

Wow. Amazing(: update!

Just found this yesterday, good stuff. more soon please.

What a chapter! Good for Veronica, she's a fighter. I'm surprised Gorya likes her so much. I'm glad Veronica got her memory back even though I hate how it happened.

Hope she killed him! but maybe that is what you want Gory to do to show why she married him. But if Mercer is her first kill, then that might explain how she became an assassin. After all, Don Lamb stopped her the first time because he said it would change her; and before that, Logan had stopped her from killing Casey after she thought he'd blown up her father because he said it would change her.

I don't know, but I hope the next chapter comes soon.

Wow! That was intense. As I may have mentioned, Mercer gives me the willies. It makes sense that a misogynist like him would never be able to let go of the woman who'd gotten the better of him. Was Smith a nod to his role on Cougar Town?

I absolutely loved Veronica fighting back, scratching his face, breaking his teeth, but then I can be pretty bloodthirsty. I hope she killed him with the letter opener, but I guess we'll see in the next chapter.

The 2013 thing confused me until I went back to the beginning. I'm assuming the story is taking place in 2016? I admit, I'm rooting for Gory here, but I miss seeing Logan - even just interacting with Mac or Dick. LOL on Legend of Billie Jean. You and me - like this. :) Great chapter. Can't wait to see what you have in store next.

Wow, heavy chapter. Not sorry that Veronica finally got some revenge (well deserved) on Mercer. Very action packed, didn't seem to be a 15,000 word story, moved fast. I love Dick as her friend, the one who pays for Veronica's stay at the asylum, the one who always faithfully visits her. Piss for Piz. Cute! Great job with a dark, heavy chapter. I was just thinking about this story the other day, hoping you would post soon. Kid you not. So I was happy to see this update in my inbox.

Wow. What a chapter! Seriously, this story is so wild it's almost a crackfic. You accomplished so much with this chapter, so much happened! I know you were having trouble writing before, but that seems to have cleared up nicely. Mercer is terrifying and you did a good job of depicting his smarminess and delusional arrogance. I can't believe I'm rooting for Gory to find V! LOL. Very different from other fics where she's usually running from him. Anyway, glad your muse is back and I can't wait to see what happens next :)

I hope you'll come back to this story soon. I like the side/sub-plots. This story is really interesting. Gory is an interesting character here.

You are taking too long finishing this story. You should just focus on main story instead adding many plots. I don't care about Darrell or The Tritons.

Whew! A lot going on here, plot-wise. I know I've said this a zillion times, but I really don't know how you keep it all straight. Don't stress about this chapter- you did a great job, as always. Things are really moving along quickly now!

I love that you have an enormous cast of characters, and that you re-visit storylines that I've almost forgotten. It sort of reminds me of "The Wire" (one of my all time favorite TV shows) because we get to see the same plotline from many different perspectives. I can see how things are starting to converge now. It's all coming together beautifully. Really well done :)

Haha Ratner! That guy always seems to pop up when you least expect him ;)