Just got caught up with this one, excellent story. The characters voices ring true and their connection to each other in the way they trust and look out for each other is so well written. Love how Gibbs has Ziva's back and is so tuned in to what might make her uncomfortable and steps in to have her six. Abby is awesome at this as well. The setting and Gibbs being an "old" player, the Gabby and Tiva is so HOT. Looking forward to the update when you can.

Great story loving the pairings. Like that gibbs like to play especially with Abby.

I love ur story pls have more tabby hot & heavy pls tell me u will write more soon

got me hooked lined and cleaned good chapter

Good morning, muse! I'm just rattling the cage to see if you're awake yet... :o)

Wow! Intense, and characters are very well written. Hope all goes well with your muse-looking forward to the update.

Welcome back! I love the way you have Gibbs and Abby supporting Ziva in their own unique ways in this chapter as well as through out the entire story.

Well done. Love Abby trying too help Ziva through this. Great job.

Nice, involved chapter and a clever weaving of Gibbs and Ziva discussing theories about the killer in between maintaining their cover, and a good exploration of how they're all watching each others' backs. An excellent focus on Ziva's unease with some aspects of what's happening.

Grit story have u done a sequel if not update plez

T

Wow... you've got me purrrrrrrrring like a little kitten right now.

This story is incredibly hot, and incredibly well written. Your knowledge of the subject matter hints at thorough experience... very sexy.

I'm really hoping you find the time to post more. I am usually not a "Gabby" fan but your character portrayl of Abby after hours is so sulty, how could Gibbs not want a piece of that. The Tiva is hot, love it

And maaaaybe just a little "Zabby"? Pretty please? ;)

C

Loved the way you had Gibbs watching out for and concerned for Ziva, and especially how he stepped in when it became too rough. You also very honestly handled the way he normally views her in your story, with more fatherly feelings but how as a man he couldn’t help a normal male reaction to a naked beautiful woman.

Great story

This was a very good chapter. Thank you.

YEAH your back! Excellent update, Gibbs watching out for Ziva, her slight discomfort causing a break in the "action". Loving it. Hurry back when you can.