Whoa. That was scary.

God, you have some wierd ideas. I liked it, but its freaky! Good twist, klike the use of short paragraphs. However, (just to be a nuisance) wouldn't people notice if Gray/Hein started walking about? Anyhoos, a good story! ;)

Brilliant. I like it.

Twisted and sick. How ever do you do it?

Creepy. And (of course) I love this kind of stuff. Weird enough to be entertaining and close enough to reality to be disturbing.

Misleading at first too (to me at least)

O.O

That is way scary! Your muses terrify me, and I have the three most troublesome muses in existence! Man... I did wonder (like, once) if Aki would be the type to go in for revenge... This is creepy... *would not like to be Hein if Aki got hold of him... Would like to be Hein just to get hold of that kickass trenchcoat*

But it's cool. Scary cool. Scary, creepy, give you nightmares cool. _