Please please pleaseeee .. continue writting this story. This is amazing i want to know what happened with effy before she met katie. Katie in this story is nice at the begining i'm surprise! lol but love katie anyway. Please update i want to know more about their relationship and i'm sure this is gonna be the best one. Thanks for sharing anyway. i can't wait for more! :)

pretty please with cherries and whipped cream on top come finish this story! i absolutely love its great and id like to see it finished!?

i really liked this, you're an amazing writer! you should have wayyy more reviews than you do because just this first ch. was great & really intriguing

I looooooveee this story! wow. It's seriously so intriguing. I've sort of got an idea of what might be going on with Effy but I'm not completely sure. This is one of the stories I would love for you to continue! I like it because the characters are still the same (personality wise) but you've placed them in different situations. It makes it easier for them to grow. Update the story? I really would love to read more

I think this story is really coming along! I'm enjoying the little snippets we're getting about Effy's past and her blossoming relationship with the other girls is really interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

ooh.. please continue :D la love it .

Great so far, keep it up. Enjoying how its progressing :D

Great so far, keep it up. Enjoying how its progressing :D

I really like this. :) You write Effy really well... I haven't seen many stories on here that I've thought really capture her on here, but this does. Please continue!

Yay I love this story. And an awesome update :)

This could be the Keffy version of 'What a Beautiful Mess' seriously! Hope you keep going with it.

Update soon please :)

First thing's first: YAY! Second: Thank you so much for posting this! This was a great chapter, and I freaking love the depth to the Keffy going on in this fic! No pressure for more, but I'm totally excited for it whenever it comes! :D

Yay! The irritable pull of fanfiction is too strong! Love this chapter, great to see two of the most insecure girls, in my opinion, have a chat. You always do them so well.

No-one can resist the power of KFF. effy, you are doomed. You might as well give in now. This is a wonderfully drawn Katie, innocent yet wise. She can see Effy, and draws her along in her wake, but also knows when not to push her too far. I am enjoying her very much. This is a great story. You just need to warn me if there's gonna be any graphic depictions of what happened to Effy then I can skip that bit.

Thankyou for this update it was awesome I always love your katie and effy!

No I don't mind I'm very happy that your writing! Love your work!