This was the most pointless use of time in my life and I absolutely loved it.

Beatrice is the best character ever.

You know that Beatrice is Mrs. Baudelaire right? She is the Baudelaire's mother (I have proof of this too). You said you were taking notes on the items concerning this story, correct? Well, pay attention and you might find some Very Fishy Details.

This is a wonderful story. I hope you know Beatrice DID NOT marry Olaf. She did not marry Lemony either. I have proof that both of these statements are true, if you want it. Anyway, keep writing this story. It's coming along very nicely. "The World is Quiet Here"

I Like It!

Finish writing the story as it was planned... please!

the excitement!! it kills!! looking foreward to more.

PUH-LEEZ go on! this is amazing! real cool!

This is really good. You've really captured Snicket's way of writing things- keep it up!

keep going for heaven's sake keep going! I know we don't know what Beatrice really looked like but have you ever come up with a mental picture in your head anyway? I am a big Beatrice fan. If you ever need beta reading services or such, I am your girl. :)-
Val

I don't think that's the story. I think it's this simple; it was after the party, Lemony was at Beatrice's house, (he he he), and she was writing a poem. (That explains the typewriter in the painting) Suddenly, she started typing too fast, and it exploded, so she went flying back, and she was dead. The end.

I know it would be true to the author to rewrite the story, but I like it the way it is. I think you should keep writing the story your way, but you should make your chapters longer.

cool! I want to know what happens next! I love the bauldelares.

Hmmm........kewl! I have very much so enjoyed this story. Please continue!

This is not the true tales of what happened to my beloved Beatrice. I should know. I was an eyewitness (a word which here means an onlooker at the scene of the crime). Please next time get the facts straight.

"The World Is Quiet Here"

With All Due Respect,
-L.S.

Hey Viv, I think you should go on this way, it's fine even if it doesn't have a plot, for it gives a kot of information ppl want to know about the books.