Great work once again so far! That was one epic battle between Luigi and Bowser! Of course, it didn't really end well... Well done on this chapter, and I'll defenitely be waiting for the next one. Of course, feel free to take your time. This defenitely sounds like a good plot, and it has to be executed properly.

Wow, this story sounds rather interesting so far! I like how the story's flowing so far, and I look forward to knowing what happens next!