this is really great!just perfect,lovely,nice&warm feeling..i want more! 3
from malaysia

This happened after he's forgotten about her? That was nice and really bittersweet :)

awwwwwwwwww! n.n cute!

Thought so! I love it :) It's cute and sweet.

This story isn't too long, but it's very cute. It made me smile at the end. Very nice.

Your oneshot was very sweet and very well-written, but at the same time a little sad because our favorite couple did not get to know about each other's feelings even at the end xp It was definitely not "stupid," like what you said about your stories in a review you wrote for my fanfic "All I Want Is You."

Keep up the great work! Your oneshot inspired me : )

Valkyrie

aww shoot. how can this be complete?

It's incredibly cute and made me immerse myself into that little cafe shop :] thanks

I'm very impressed. For your first fanfic this is really good. I assume that you write your own stuff already, but that is fine. In fact great. I am just always impressed with first fanfics, because I think of mine. I was 12, and had never written anything outside of school before. Oh that was terrible.

Anyway, its short, sweet, and wonderful. I am looking forward to more works from you. (thumbs up)

:)

I think I ever read something like this in a manga, but the couple met in a library.

About your story, this is cute, i like it :)

Awwww my gosh that was cute!

Miko

Isn't this from a manga? I remember reading exactly the same thing. But you did well translating their emotions into words.

so cute good job.

I wAnt more!

So nice! You should write another chapter n.n

And maybe, just maybe, he could answer her, and she could gather some courage ;)

Love the story should be a two parter