I like this, it captured her character in the movie. The movie made me cry :(

This makes me want to cry :'(

Absolutely amazing. Her character was captured perfectly, and it sounded exsctly like she would think. Just a suggestion though, instead of putting the yelling in all caps, try italicizing and an exclamation point; all caps can give headaches.

Wonderful story, very heartbreaking.

-Vince

*faves*