Ok, same review. This is a US show, it's mom. It completely throws everything off. This happens in the US, US does not say Mum. If I was writing for Dr Who, I'd say Mum.

Still waiting for your next chapter, along with others, I'm sure. :) Would love to see an update sometime soon!

Great story! I check frequently for updates. :) It sounds like Seth went through the surgery okay. It will be interesing to see how the pump helps improve his life. As he has a severe form of Cerebral Palsy, no one is expecting a miracle, but hopefully the pump gives him a little bit more mobility. I've seen stories or tv shows where people with spinal cord injuries or other medical problems are miraculously cured, but I like how you make this story realistic and true-to-life. Hopefully, Seth's personal life keeps improving!

Omg... I just read this straight through! You are an amazing writer! Hope you upload soon :D

It was great! Oh no Oliver's in the picture. Here comes trouble! How does he react to Seth's disability?

Please don't let Marissa make the same mistake with Oliver that she did on the show. I thought she was gonna be stronger in this story. Don't let Summer screw up too bad with Seth.

I just found this again and and caught up. I know it's been a while since you updsted, but I hope you'll keep writing this.

I love your story! I want more please

Yes! Another job well done. Poor Seth. This summer hasn't been the best for him health-wise, has it? It seems like more often than not, he's not feeling well. :( Between that and his mobility issues... Hopefully, the surgery will help improve things and not slow him up too much. Can't wait to see what you write next. :)

I recently came across this story and I really like it! I've already read it through several times and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I can't wait to see how you handle Seth's surgery and recovery time. Perhaps, Summer will visit him in the hospital? I had a friend that used a Baclofen Pump, so it will be interesting for you to write about it. Great job!

Oliver, yay and nay. Have him in the story, but have it go the other way around. Have Marissa believe and trust Ryan like she should've done on the show. Give Marissa a lot more backbone than she had on the show. How about no shoplifting and no drinking on Christmas, but have something equally interesting happen? Will you put Kaitlin in the story too? She can offically meet Ryan at the Kick-off Carnival and really hit it off. Maybe she can go with Ryan & Marissa to Chino on Thanksgiving to see Trey. What do you think of all this? I hope you use these ideas.

I liked this chapter a lot! Seth's concerns about Kirsten treating him and Ryan differently, although she considers them both as her sons was to the point. One shouldn't say the one thing and than act in the opposite way. I also found Ryan's way of handling Marissa's problem very mature. His reasoning is probably the better way than just helping her running away each time. You're stlye of writing is consistent and your thoughts are consequent, that what I like most about your story )

Still adore this ;)

I love this fic so much; you have the Seth/Ryan dynamic down. Really looking forward to more ;)

This is brilliant. I'd love to see more...