A great story. Very well written.

it was a good one thank you

I can't see Merry giving Pippin a spanking. They are both children.

I don't get to read too many stories where Merry spanks Pippin, and I found this very enjoyable.

Interesting

Sweet...

aww cute ending! merry was kinda mean...poor little innocent pippin. lol, innocent. ahhh that's a good one. this story was great!

i loved it! in fact i love all your stories. :)

you probably already know this but there's a lord of the rings discipline group at yahoo...i ran across it last night. just in case you don't know the address is group/LOTR_Discipline/

can't wait for the next story!

Hello, just thought I'd clear some things up here... Elanya- I updated my bio with the answer to that question ;) Goldilocks- Read the books. If you have, check Appendix C with the family trees, Pippin was born in 1390 Shire Reackoning, Merry in 1382 SR. I take pride in my detail and I always write in bookverse.

Thanks for the reviews! )

Lia

Not to be rude or anything but I think Pippin is a few years younger than even just one.I don't think Merry would be spanking him.

what is it with you and spanking?

This is your best one yet, Lia. It's sweet. It's a discipline story that's non-abusive and non-sadistic. It's a discipline story that's gentle and ends with a hug. I *LIKE* discipline stories like that.

On the writing side: this is a nice, well-rounded and well-balanced short character piece. I especially like the way you show the changing roles the cousins play: Pippin's indignant pout at Merry's change from playmate to Older Cousin Who Might Discipline A Wayward Pipsqueak Cousin to Pippin's willingness to be comforted by that same Older Cousin, thus accepting Merry's new role. Nice.

this is a wonderful story! very original and quite funny. i love it. please continue with this coz its so funny and amusing. its really nice, please get another chapter. pippin is so cute and so is merry. i love both of them. (sighs) am i straying out of the review? oh wells, please, please continue with this...thank you...

Too cute...I know Merry and Pip are partners in crime but Pippin had to have

been a sore trial even for Merry when he was a boy, Merry being the elder by

8 years... : ) Is there going to be another chapter...? The summer is just

beginning after all, lol...