 WatsonandMary4ever 4/7/12 . chapter 1A great story. Very well written. |
 wandamarie 9/13/09 . chapter 1it was a good one thank you |
 a person 5/25/07 . chapter 1 I can't see Merry giving Pippin a spanking. They are both children. |
 BlackFox12 4/24/07 . chapter 1I don't get to read too many stories where Merry spanks Pippin, and I found this very enjoyable. |
 mickeymoose 1/15/04 . chapter 1Interesting |
 Natta 12/27/02 . chapter 1Sweet... |
 silenceinlight 12/26/02 . chapter 1aww cute ending! merry was kinda mean...poor little innocent pippin. lol, innocent. ahhh that's a good one. this story was great! |
 Cristina 4/16/02 . chapter 1 i loved it! in fact i love all your stories. :)
you probably already know this but there's a lord of the rings discipline group at yahoo...i ran across it last night. just in case you don't know the address is group/LOTR_Discipline/
can't wait for the next story! |
 Lia Galanodel 3/28/02 . chapter 1Hello, just thought I'd clear some things up here... Elanya- I updated my bio with the answer to that question ;) Goldilocks- Read the books. If you have, check Appendix C with the family trees, Pippin was born in 1390 Shire Reackoning, Merry in 1382 SR. I take pride in my detail and I always write in bookverse.
Thanks for the reviews! )
Lia |
 GoldilocksofHobbiton 3/28/02 . chapter 1 Not to be rude or anything but I think Pippin is a few years younger than even just one.I don't think Merry would be spanking him. |
 bowslinger 3/25/02 . chapter 1what is it with you and spanking? |
 Ionna 3/25/02 . chapter 1 This is your best one yet, Lia. It's sweet. It's a discipline story that's non-abusive and non-sadistic. It's a discipline story that's gentle and ends with a hug. I *LIKE* discipline stories like that.
On the writing side: this is a nice, well-rounded and well-balanced short character piece. I especially like the way you show the changing roles the cousins play: Pippin's indignant pout at Merry's change from playmate to Older Cousin Who Might Discipline A Wayward Pipsqueak Cousin to Pippin's willingness to be comforted by that same Older Cousin, thus accepting Merry's new role. Nice. |
 Mystic Pebble 3/24/02 . chapter 1this is a wonderful story! very original and quite funny. i love it. please continue with this coz its so funny and amusing. its really nice, please get another chapter. pippin is so cute and so is merry. i love both of them. (sighs) am i straying out of the review? oh wells, please, please continue with this...thank you... |
 MarigoldG 3/24/02 . chapter 1Too cute...I know Merry and Pip are partners in crime but Pippin had to have
been a sore trial even for Merry when he was a boy, Merry being the elder by
8 years... : ) Is there going to be another chapter...? The summer is just
beginning after all, lol... |