What a gorgeous chapter. I love that you had booth cheat on Hannah. I know that's a weird thing to write, but I love that you don't make him or Bones into saints. Can't wait to see how you get them back together.

I read this entire story last night. A very enjoyable read.

really good story! I really like how you speak about the sexual part without saying too much!

One of my favorite chapter so far!

great start!

I was totally wrong about this story. I remember long time ago I saw it and the description that Hannah accepts Booth's proposal put me off totally :P I could not imagined that such a scenario would be a good thing to read and Yes I confess I was absolutely wrong :P I loved your other story ' Thats why Im here' and recently I was looking for smth to read and I thought oh what the hell I will give it a go and OMG this story is so brilliant! I cant wait to read a sequel.

I loved the chapter about their night together, so full of emotions! and their whole journey back to each other. I think if by any chance Hannah agreed to Booth's proposal it wouldnt last anyway and I think exactly what you wrote would happened.

Wow. Just wow. Amazing story. I just loved it- the way you took us through B&B's journey was just beautiful. I am so excited to read the sequel. Just one little thing that bothered me-how you portrayed Sweets in this. I understand that everyone has their own opinions on characters and this is how you view Sweets, but I don't know. It just irked me how you wrote him as some nosy kid who's always sticking his nose in where it didn't belong. I always felt that he was doing that because he cared. And usually, he turned out to be quite right. But otherwise, just amazing. Great storyline.

i have just read Plan A and had to was amazingly written.I could'nt stop once i'd is now 2.36 am u.k time and i have literally just finished story made me wrote in character perfectly.I am not an author,simply a bones fan who loves this site because it allows me to discover talent like yours!.

WOW.

This chapter, more than any of the others so far, really blew me away. Very well-written.

I just started reading this story tonight. I'd seen it pop up earlier, when you were working on it, but I wasn't in the mood for a story where the blonde said yes. I had no idea I was in for a pregnancy story. I did guess that Booth was the father-and had given his permission, Brennan wouldn't have used his stuff without that-but I did not imagine that the child was conceived the old-fashioned way. Of course we all knew that B&B were still in love, and I know you'll get them together eventually.

I LOVED this. I read it over the course of a few days, and like a really good book I couldn't wait to get back to it each time, I went to bed thinking about it (Near the beginning, angsty and depressed as it was far too close to the show, near the end with a big happy smile on my face). It was just what I was hoping for in a fic, and a whole lot more. The first several chapters had that absolutely brilliant way of revealing details slowly and changing up the game in ways never expected. Just when I thought I had it figured out you changed the timeline of events again. Really brilliant. And I LOVED how you laid out the series of "elephants in the room" in chapter 11. Because that's what I think the show desperately needs right now - for them to discuss or at least acknowledge those elephants. I really cannot get past the trainwreck of this season if they don't. So, it was cathartic in a big way to have someone else identify those issues and discuss them, even if it is in a fic. ;) Aaaand, I have to say I was quite impressed how you handled the pregnancy, birth, and afterwards without spiraling into overly saccharine fluff, which the why I usually avoid those subjects like the plague. It was a little much for me for Bones to yell out "I love you" at the moment of giving birth, but it was a really clever tactic for them to finally be discussing these floodgate issues as, well, the floodgates open and her labor ramps up. Haha. I loved in the later half of the fic how it was basically a series of small, subtle moments in them repairing their broken relationship, because I was thinking that's the only realistic way I can see that happening. Anyways, you also caught some brilliant secondary character moments, especially at the big reveal of paternity (Hodgin's DUUUUDE and a hug before walking out, and Sweet's hilariously long monologue). And I'm sure I'm missing so much more but basically, I loved it. I loved it to little tiny pieces and I'm so glad someone is writing fic like this, because with the show the way it is, I am relying on fic to fill the emotional gaps and make me feel the way the show used to. ;) So THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU again!

This was truly excellent and I am starting on the next part now. Thanks for all the good work.

Please tell me sweets dies a horrible death in this story!

Aw that was soo good. Loved it. Of course they would have trouble to agree on most things. They are not ones to do things how its supposed to be done. Great advice from Angela, its about time they get to be a couple for real.

Loved the name of the baby CJ.

Lookig forward to see what you come up with next. Thank you for a great read and for sharing it with us.

This was very enjoyable :). As for the date that went up in smoke, my bet is on early March of next year. HH assured everyone he would not be ending the show with the beginning of the relationship and also that he could do a solid 8 seasons. I look forward to the sequel of this story.

Wow.

What an amazing, heartwrencing, brilliant, realistic tale! Okay, so I'm a big-time shipper and fluffster, but I so appreciate a good, meaty, angsty tale and this one was told beautifully. I'm sorry I didn't review all the way through, but I just read this in one go and I couldn't stop to comment. :-) Really looking forward to enjoying the sequel!