|Reviews for Across The Universe|
| missprez2007 5/21/13 . chapter 46
This is amazing! I'm speechless! I cannot wait until the next installment! ;p
| phoebe turner 5/19/13 . chapter 46
AMAZING!1 I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Alphie 5/20/13 . chapter 46
Now THAT is how to build tension! Seriously, ladies, I think this is one of the best plotted chapters you've ever written. It reads like the way it would play out in an episode on TV or in a film. Just beautiful! And I can't wait for Kal-El to realize he's not only alive, but that he also has super powers! And the baby! OH! The baby! Sigh...
| astrida 5/18/13 . chapter 46
You are killing me! You're story is cool, new, refreshing... just incredible. And there is two weeks pause between each chapter. It is like cold turkey. And this last chapter (46)... can you, please, end one chapter without cliffhanger? we will appreciate it. You are as cruel as George R. R. Martin, this way. (Just don't get any idea about killing our favorite characters ).
Love you and read your' story.
See you in two weeks.
| Cloismycel 5/18/13 . chapter 46
Oh dear me. To quote Kal-El, "it *cannot* end like this"! Bonus chapter later today? No? Well, you should consider it. ;) Or any day of the week really! Two more weeks is too long! I've been busy with school and out of the country, but I've finally had a chance to catch up and I've gotta say that I still love your story! So, so good.
That last encounter between Zod and Jor-El was disturbing-and I hope that Jor-El realizes the full ramifications of what Zod is willing to do (which he seems to have realized in the last chapter). Given the restrained nature of Kryptonians, Jor-El's response to Kal-El's leaving and poor ship design was perfect. As was Lara's! Smart woman she is! I couldn't figure out how you would have Kal-El & the ship survive as I was reading, but when I got to this chapter I realized that the blueprints Kal-El left behind could have decoys. Brilliant!
It was nice to see Kal-El and Huang interacting. I like that Huang knew Kal-El's plan of trying to find Lois (which, I've gotta be honest is a tad naive and very sweet, as if he could find Lois by simply *flying* over the US). Now, I obviously don't know where Kal-El has landed, but I'm hoping those plains are Kansas plains! And that the "black wall" was merely a storm/tornado wall-I've seen "edges" of storms that literally look like some kind of wall in the sky; it's bizarre that it can just start and end so abruptly. And despite hitting his head, Kal-El IS going to wake up (in case you were unsure of how to write the next bit of the story).
Okay, this is long... but I'll just share a few thoughts about Lois! I love that she's having a baby during a tornado and that she had a boy, despite psyching herself up for a girl. Haha, there was a point in the story where she referred to the baby as a girl very assuredly and I had to go back a few chapters to see if I missed some point when she found out the sex. Nope, just Lois being Lois! His dark hair and blue eyes sound lovely! The first Kryptonian-human child has been born! The significance of this is hugely monumental. I can't wait for Kal-El to find out. I really hope that he is reunited with Lois soon-I can't wait for their reunion and for him to find out about his son. I just have absolutely no idea how you two are going to take that once he find out. How in the world do you tell any Kryptonians about that? And how does he tell Lara and Jor-El?
Last point... I'm so glad that Jor-El has joined in with the "traitors"! With so many people concerned about Zod's reign, something *has* to change. And hopefully soon. Hhmm, now that I'm thinking about it, I wonder if Jahn-Or will use that info in his fish tank at some point soon... I'm curious to see how that revolution will play out and how the humans will be involved given all of the human hostages have been freed. Oh! And I can't wait for Sam to meet Kal-El-I envision him being torn between wanting to hurt him (for impregnating his daughter) and laud him (for freeing all of the human hostages). We'll see! (I hope!) Well done! I'm looking forward to more! Don't make us wait too long for Lois & Kal-El to be reunited! (Oh, maybe the Kents will find him in his crashed ship?!)
| clarkfan325 5/20/13 . chapter 46
Amazing chapter. I'm glad that Lois gave birth and that Kal-El managed to land the rest of the humans on earth. I hope that he does land in Kansas and is found by the Kents.
| reeven 5/19/13 . chapter 46
so Kala is out...Jason? or you are going to change his name?
Omg! wait for the next update is going to be a torture.
"I can't do that, Lois," ... You got me there.
| burgundyburning 5/18/13 . chapter 46
YES! He made it to Earth. I'm so excited! What a great chapter. I'm anxious for poor Lois but she's a strong girl.
| Iwam 5/18/13 . chapter 46
I know he will not die but I still worry about the landing... Will it be in smallville? And what about the baby's name, will be Jason or Kon-el? Please, update soon!
| the archduke 5/18/13 . chapter 46
Really enjoying this story. A true AU with just enough callbacks to the source material.
| Guest 5/13/13 . chapter 45
You can't stop NOW!
| bloodymary2 5/6/13 . chapter 45
Never reach earth... Now, I'm worried.
Couldn't help thinking of a face-off between Kal-El and General Lane when I read that Kal-El was building a ship and then actually planing to use it. I imagined bullets and a bullet proof Kal-El and all sorts of Superman related knowledge. And then the question came: Do kryptonians know about their status under the yellow sun? Or is it not common knowledge and Jor-El has failed to inform Zod?
| reeven 5/8/13 . chapter 45
Dont stop there! please : (
omg the baby is coming and Daddy too!
| reeven 5/8/13 . chapter 44
i hope for a boy : D
| kami kyuubi sama 5/7/13 . chapter 45
GAH! I need another chapter!