Ha. That was cute. I liked it! Thanks for writing!

Best line: “Fuck no. Dunk his half-blind ass.”

This story is awesome. I always feel more respect for the author when they write angst without resorting to romance. I'm not a yaoi fan. I think it's unacceptable when you have such great characters to play off of and you chicken out and make them make out instead. So, Kudos to you. Great job! ) Hn.

i loved it. it's very beautifully written and so sincere. theres no ther way to describe it.

Wow. I couldn't stop until I finished the whole story. I love the trading scars scene. Sanzo's talk about not giving into the easy part was so poignant and fitting. How do you write like that? :) Loved it!

Not what I expected, but I really enjoyed reading it.

I liked this one. Excellent.

lmao, my most favorite line was: Fuck no, dunk his half blind ass.

Cracked me the hell up XD

I love the point behind this one and you ended it nicely, with some closure and didn't leave us neccessarily needing more XD awesome job.

wow, nice fic. personally i think you pegged Sanzo and Gojyo's personality. woot!

That...was beautiful...

fucking good shit

They talk a bit more than is usual; kinda plain-spoken, very much just putting things out there. But it's all true. And it doesn't shout. I just love this fic. Like a hot bath, it's really very relaxing.

after writing a few...i'm sorry for not being original, but know this..i like your writing it's style, its propensity to convey thoughts and feelings and your characters just come to life. so if i say nice a hundred times...just know that i like.

I don't know how to 'critique'. All I can do is give you my humble opinion: I liked it very much. There were parts of it that made me so sad. And isnt' that what good story telling is about: to make the reader feel the emotions behind it? The emotional pain you put the characters thru was done very well. Thank you for this fic.

This was a smart, clever and very well writen fanfic. My complements.

Wonderful. Simply wonderful.