Nicely understated, in a way. A not so nice way of looking at what might have been lingering problems.

That was amazingly sad. What a depressing thing to read just before going to bed, lol. Good job though. Characterizations seem right on target.

Totally over the top! You really need a beta with medical knowledge.

LOVED it...It is a REALLY good story...

Dang...that was so sad. But it was really good, too. You're a great writer.

Good story!