 rubie 2002-04-06 . chapter 1Oooo... this was the one that you sent me a couple months back? Loved the internal monologue in this piece, you seem to be doing a lot of first person explorations lately. Loved the contrast between the internal conflicts and the exterior control of amiboshi. Its deceptive in a way, he seems to be talking quite animately. Or is that just me? humm... loved how you added a whole new side to both Amiboshi and Hotohori, it expands on the character in the series and makes it much more believeable and more understandable. I can see them doing that and saying those things. I'll be looking around for more of your works! |