 Another Dark Bring 7/29/02 . chapter 1Wow. Like the tip of an iceberg. Looking forward for more of your fics. |
 ERINES 5/12/02 . chapter 1 MC!ANG GANDA NANG STORY TAPOSIN MO YAN,HA! NABASA KO NA ANG SA CSS MAGANDA KUNG MAY MAGSESELOS NA PAIR!PARA MAS MAGULO! DAPAT RIN NANDOON SI TOUYA HA! SANA MASIMULAN MO NA YAN! 134FRIEND! |
 Prof.Q 5/10/02 . chapter 1 Your Fic SUCKS! Happy!
fic is interesting but it does not sound like Yukino |
 D-Scyther 4/6/02 . chapter 1There are a couple of grammatic errors. like the repetition of certain phrases on one sentence and incorrect spelling. But overall... the structure is great, excellent POV and use of words... I should pay you back for those two reviews you gave me... a bright future awaits you... |
 vivien 3/29/02 . chapter 1 whoa, that was really deep. I love POVs with flowery language and the angsty works. Especially the way you make use of words...economically. Gives this nice elegant -feel- to it - I can't really explain it, but it's very cool. |
 Angel Slayer 3/24/02 . chapter 1 Nyahaha! I *get* to be the first reviewer! Two thumbs up, miko-kun! But I guess you already know that...anyway, keep up the good work! ;) |