If only it had went down this way! Then maybe we'd still have Prentiss on the show. Anyways, really great start! Now if only one of them would make a move! :) Can't wait to read more!

I love the way this has started and hope you plan to continue it. It is sweet and lovely and exciting and suspenseful all at the same time!

Great start! Looking forward to reading more!

I liked how Dave and Emily get along. I liked how Emily told Hotch that she felt safe at Dave's house and she told the truth when Dave's been a perfect gentleman. I hope Hotch's plan works. I hope to see more of this story.