| Reviews for Salvation |
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Agnostic 9/28/05 . chapter 1 Your God has forsaken you. Welcome to hell. |
gloriousanon 2/27/03 . chapter 1That's really good! Very good. |
Jennifer Jolie 4/20/02 . chapter 1Amen. God bless. |
Denizen1 3/29/02 . chapter 1*Your poem from God's perspective* Human, have mercy Upon my existence, Forgive me of my crimes And punish me for them. I know I do not exist, on my own, so I must have You as my make. I have cursed Your ancestors I have killed so many of You I have not saved you from this darkness And joy in my black heart You cannot fill. You loved me so much That You fell down and worshiped me You knew you shouldn't do it I made laws against idols, Now I'm the hyporcrete. Now that I'm cursed by You Now that I cease to exist I will descend into the Hell I created for You And You will be free of me. |
Jenny Y 3/27/02 . chapter 1I love all your poems, and this was as good as the rest. |
Fayra 3/24/02 . chapter 1 Thats great...I know the feeling that you put in your poetry...it was very good. |
Sparky 3/24/02 . chapter 1 Thank you. Truly, thank you. |