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Celina
2002-05-24
ch 8,
abuseGreat story. Only part that I didn't really believe was that Sydney believed that they were drunk, but then again, maybe she /wanted/ to believe. Great story, keep it up (even if this one is done:)
Dragontiger96
2002-05-23
ch 8,
abusethat was great. *shouts in happiness* yay she finally told them. yay.
Harriet
2002-05-23
ch 8,
abuseReally good.
coolbeans
2002-05-22
ch 8, anon.
abusebravo! Im so glad you wrote an epilogue, cuz 1, its a REALLY good epilogue, and 2, i needed the closure!
Vilandra
2002-05-22
ch 8,
abuseWow. Awesome ending! I loved it. Great story.
Leanne8582
2002-05-22
ch 8,
abuseGreat ending. Probably how it would have gone if Will had never found out.
jewls13
2002-05-21
ch 8, anon.
abusethis was beautiful.
Ashni
2002-05-21
ch 8,
abuseAw, really nice job, Shannon!! I love the epilogue--it gave so much insight into Will's mind and I felt it ended very nicely. No loose ends for those of us fanatics who are having enough trouble coping with the finale cliffhanger, but not rushed. *sniff* I'm so proud! lol! ;-) -Nicole
Ashni
2002-05-16
ch 7,
abuseTHE END??!!! The end but not the end because the end would be the end? *scratches head* Kudos to you if you can figure out that sentence. lol! I really liked it though, and I will be waiting for the epilogue. ;-) Hint hint.

- Nicole
Ashni
2002-05-16
ch 6,
abuseYeah Francie!!!! Eagerly going to the next chapter...

- Nicole
Vilandra
2002-05-16
ch 7,
abuseHuh. Wow, I wasn't expecting that! Fun stuff. Blunt, and completely out of the blue...can't wait to see what happenes with the epilogue.
coolbeans
2002-05-15
ch 7, anon.
abusemmm hmm, you are a very good writer. i love the metaphors, i live for metaphors in writing! Im gonna go c if you've written anything else now!
Dragontiger96
2002-05-15
ch 7,
abusegreat. you really got the characters feelings. not alot of authors can do that.
Vaughn+Sydney
2002-05-15
ch 7,
abuseI'm glad it's the end, but not really the end Get it? hee hee hee
Leanne8582
2002-05-15
ch 7,
abuseVery good. I look forward to the epilogue.
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