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| Celina 2002-05-24 ch 8, | abuseGreat story. Only part that I didn't really believe was that Sydney believed that they were drunk, but then again, maybe she /wanted/ to believe. Great story, keep it up (even if this one is done:) |
| Dragontiger96 2002-05-23 ch 8, | abusethat was great. *shouts in happiness* yay she finally told them. yay. |
| Harriet 2002-05-23 ch 8, | abuseReally good. |
| coolbeans 2002-05-22 ch 8, anon. | abusebravo! Im so glad you wrote an epilogue, cuz 1, its a REALLY good epilogue, and 2, i needed the closure! |
| Vilandra 2002-05-22 ch 8, | abuseWow. Awesome ending! I loved it. Great story. |
| Leanne8582 2002-05-22 ch 8, | abuseGreat ending. Probably how it would have gone if Will had never found out. |
| jewls13 2002-05-21 ch 8, anon. | abusethis was beautiful. |
| Ashni 2002-05-21 ch 8, | abuseAw, really nice job, Shannon!! I love the epilogue--it gave so much insight into Will's mind and I felt it ended very nicely. No loose ends for those of us fanatics who are having enough trouble coping with the finale cliffhanger, but not rushed. *sniff* I'm so proud! lol! ;-) -Nicole |
| Ashni 2002-05-16 ch 7, | abuseTHE END??!!! The end but not the end because the end would be the end? *scratches head* Kudos to you if you can figure out that sentence. lol! I really liked it though, and I will be waiting for the epilogue. ;-) Hint hint. - Nicole |
| Ashni 2002-05-16 ch 6, | abuseYeah Francie!!!! Eagerly going to the next chapter... - Nicole |
| Vilandra 2002-05-16 ch 7, | abuseHuh. Wow, I wasn't expecting that! Fun stuff. Blunt, and completely out of the blue...can't wait to see what happenes with the epilogue. |
| coolbeans 2002-05-15 ch 7, anon. | abusemmm hmm, you are a very good writer. i love the metaphors, i live for metaphors in writing! Im gonna go c if you've written anything else now! |
| Dragontiger96 2002-05-15 ch 7, | abusegreat. you really got the characters feelings. not alot of authors can do that. |
| Vaughn+Sydney 2002-05-15 ch 7, | abuseI'm glad it's the end, but not really the end Get it? hee hee hee |
| Leanne8582 2002-05-15 ch 7, | abuseVery good. I look forward to the epilogue. |