you must continue

ooo i love this! please update soon!

Ahwwwwwww depressing in a good way...

I liked it.

Sounds promising.

Thomas

I really like how this is going

:3

Um.

So where do they come from? You know, since Damascus is the capital city of Syria and Masyaf seemed quite close on the in-game map and since it's stated in ACII that Altair was a syrian Assassin, I would say they are from Syria. Or are you changing that for your plot? As far as I know, the people in Syria have some kind of civil war problems over ethnic groups and religions, sooo ... if you choose to do some "omfg them terrorist kids shush" thing, you should probably add that you changed their country of origin from Syria to ... Iraq or Afghanistan or something. Well, idk.

Also ... ugh. Sorry, but since every imported TV show, be it a cartoon or not takes plays in the USA, the setting is just overused. D: But of course, you can skethc the hate of the other kids and people out better if you leave them in the US. No other country had this much soldiers in Iraq/Afghanistan. Not even the Germans.

Interesting so far. This story has good potential. Good job and update soon! :)

wow, i've been waiting for an AU like this. cant wait to see where it's going

anyway all in all its good, but i think the near end is too rushed. i think it will be better if there is a dialogue between altair and malik, or with the soldier. it will make the story blend smoother.